Open Poetry #10 |
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The Transformation |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA ![]() |
To Rodger...thank you for giving me my wings and the courage to use them ~Always, Ruth ![]() The Transformation I crawled to you defeated, weakened, a shell empty and cast aside. You saw beauty where I saw scars; offered solace when I needed it most; and sheltered me in the midst of life’s storms. I clung to your branches fearing the fall. I drank from your nectar thirsting for life. I hungered for tranquillity and fed on your touch. Unperceivable, the changes came 'till I emerged from the cocoon of your arms spreading delicate wings to fly. The transformation complete, I was reborn in the beauty of love. ![]() What lies behind us and lies before us are small matters compaired to what lies within us. ~Ralph Waldo Emerson [This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (edited 10-11-2000).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, this then is the love! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Thank you Sunshine ![]() ![]() |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Ruth, This was so beautiful my friend!! Congratulations on the upcoming wedding. You deserve happiness. I wish you and Rodger the best!! ![]() Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Thank you Jennifer, my friend...I hope all is well with you, you are in my thoughts and prayers often ![]() |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
its amazing to see how much power love have. and I can read that in your poem. loved and enjoyed reading it. Charisma |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ruth--My heart sings with you and this beautiful transformation that love has brought...hugs! |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
you - and your writing - were beautiful before - but it has now taken on a transcendend beauty all its own - and the source is obvious - better still - I know the feeling - I am sooooooo happy for you |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Thank you Martie, Wilfred and Charisma ![]() |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Ah, Hoot... this is as lovely as the poet who penned it! Congratulations... and may your happiness ever increase! |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Sometimes all it takes is someone to offer a breeze kissed with love and we find the courage and strength to fly...beautiful work Ruth, I loved this piece~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh how happy I am for you...what a lucky man he is to have this kind of love. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Thank you Paula, Suthern and butterfiles I happen to think I'm pretty lucky too ![]() |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
WOWWWWWWW....this one really makes me long for a transformation of my own. Absoulutely beautiful and breathtaking even for a cowboy. |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Beautiful, my friend, just beautiful! I am so very happy for you! |
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Jeffrey Carter![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Oh Ruthie ![]() It is truly a wonderful thing to be in love and have someone love you just as much...my best to you both ![]() Wise man say "Those who live in the past let the future sneak up on them" and "Make each moment count, it could be your last" |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Thank you so much Rosemary, Jeffery and Mark....it is wonderful to receive as much love as you give ![]() |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
And a Glorious love it is! Beautiful Ruth! ![]() All the very best to you and Rodger ![]() Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Ruth a truely beautiful poem. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Beautiful. ![]() "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Thank you Maree, Brian and Eagle One ![]() |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Metamorphosis is a lovely sight to behold... He's a lucky man, Ruth... ![]() |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Thanks Nan ![]() |
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Poet's Sister Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 80North Carolina |
I have read many of your poems on this site before joining myself. This is as beautiful as the rest! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Thank you Poet's Sister....I'm glad you enjoy my work. Looking forward to reading some of yours ![]() |
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Poet's Sister Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 80North Carolina |
Ah...but Ruth, you have read a few of mine. As a matter of fact, you are well acquainted with a couple that I can't post here...As I said...I am the Poet's Sister! ![]() [This message has been edited by Poet's Sister (edited 10-17-2000).] |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Ruth, I love it when you call me Roger! Huh? Another one??? uhhh, I love this poem, Ruth! ![]() |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Smiling here....Poet's sister, that was definately in the back of my mind when I read your name and your first posting happened to be to one of my poems. It's a pleasure seeing you here and your sister happens to be a very lucky woman ![]() Balladeer...giggling, you know I'll always write for you too ![]() ![]() |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Oh my, Ruth! This is absoultely beautiful, I am so happy for you sweet poetess! May your wings bring you much love and joy ![]() Take care, Melissa~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good stuff today...wonderful message |
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