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| Open Poetry #10 |
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Loves Demise |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Heat and fire Hearts desire Life of pain Lived in vain. Flowers wilting Times are shifting Dreams uplifting Souls are drifting Rock and stone From hell’s thrown Misery shown Chances blown Society cries A child dies Evil’s rise, Loves demise. "Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today" ~Broadway Musical RENT~ *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
This is very powerful and concise Cassers. Probably one of the best things I've ever read from you...flowed wonderfully, the short words gave it a good and harsh feeling, which went very well with the topic. Very well done my friend!  *Krista Knutson* "Wheresoever you go, go with all your heart." -Confucious |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
Dude, Cassers, your pretty good at this. Stick with it, things will get better. Keith W. Mullin Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you. |
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Waverly917 Member
since 2000-09-23
Posts 90Hugo, MN |
Oh Cassers dear! That was a wonderful poem. Hope things get better. Abra |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Dawn This just flowed and definitely went with the title of this gem. I loved it even though it ended kinda sadly. Garfield |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Krista~ Thanks! I really take great pride in what you say. thanks a mil. Keith~ Thanks. If yah hadn't told me to, I probably wouldn't have written anything at all. Abra~thanks for your reply.. it means a lot. I think this are getting better.ggrn3~ thank you for your kind words. they mean a lot to me. "Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today" ~Broadway Musical RENT~ *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
A very powerful outpouring~ Melissa~ |
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Secret Whisper Member
since 2001-01-25
Posts 298Through the Looking Glass |
Cassie, how very emotionally charged. Truly a wonderful write. Very elloquent. ~Alice~ "We also know how cruel the truth often is, and we wonder whether delusion is not more consoling."- Henri Poincare (1854-1912) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very powerful! I fully enjoyed! |
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