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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2000-10-09 04:57 PM

One...leftover feelings from a failed relationship..

Too many times she wasn't there.
Now we have no love to share.
Love was given by one alone.
A lonely house is not a home.
He now reveals the way his heart feels.
He could care for her again but he never will.
Disapppointments and regrets cannot be concealed
as time goes on revealing the hurt we feel.

He didn't always feel this way.
Once his heart was full of fresh love to share
and he truly believed she was the one to care.
But she was not the one. She is one.
He is also alone.

Jameslee@October09,2000

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

1 posted 2000-10-09 05:17 PM

Lovely story you've written here Jimmy...It makes you feel sorry for the guy.Wonderful piece and thanks for sharing.

Nathan

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2000-10-09 06:12 PM

Superb James. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

3 posted 2000-10-09 06:32 PM

I LIKED IT A LOT!!!!

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

4 posted 2000-10-10 08:47 PM

~James,...this one hits ya right in the heart. So alive with emotion,...so real in it's tone. Well written. Take care of yourself. *Peace.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2000-10-10 09:29 PM

James~ be glad that's not where you are standing today......this is very real for a lot of hearts out there.

-SEA

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

6 posted 2000-10-11 04:39 PM

right from the heart, and so true.

Charisma

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2000-10-16 04:43 AM

Thank you Nate, Sven, Vandana, SpitFire, Sea and Charisma for the nice comments...James

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

8 posted 2000-10-17 11:28 PM

this James was a masterpiece you wove it into beautiful words, and your so right love takes two, and you've showed it here with lots of feeling

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

9 posted 2000-10-20 02:29 AM

James...yep you sure cant love alone...one person doing all the giving just doesnt work...

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2000-11-03 02:44 PM

Thank you Rosebud and Paula for reading and understanding...James

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