Open Poetry #10 |
The Silence of Empty...for Daniel |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
The Silence Of Empty The silence of empty voices Could never continue or last, In the loneliness here this time of night Hearing sounds of my heart beating fast. Drawing shadows beneath the night sky As the moon appears, in it's glow, Memories made, forever in mind Are producing for me their show. The kisses once placed on my forehead That night when in tears, so distraught, Your tender displaying, easing of pains, How priceless the warmth, of yours sought. As we began merging desires, Embracing the depths of our hearts, Passions tormenting, doubled the silence. Tomorrow is today's fresh start. Now that time goes by so swiftly, Tracing the fading light, Laced in shadows, 'til the morning comes, Taken in by my dreams of the night. For yesterday's memories sustain me, Loving you today, all the more, Waiting the dance in foreverland, From the silence of empty before. ~Wynter Bliss |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Wynter Bliss, How can I thank you for this memorable poem. This is very special, caring, and full of genuine love for another person. The pain I have endured over the last few days have been terrible. With God on my side, I put aside my hurt in prayerful moments. I am heading back home, the torment is over at least for the time being, hopefully forever. Thank you so much. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
That was such a beautiful poem to write for Daniel. You have a gift. And a beautiful loving heart. You're the warmest Wynter I've ever known. Thank you for being you. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wynter, hope you don't mind if I take this one to my heart, even though written for Daniel. "For yesterday's memories sustain me, Loving you today, all the more, Waiting the dance in foreverland, From the silence of empty before." This is so incredibly true, and said in such a perfect way. Sandra |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
What a heart! What a friend! What a wonderful act of kindness after reading your post to Daniel...put me on your list as a fan. Wonderful poem. Marcy |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
a beautiful poem indeed..very thoughtful NT so nice of you.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Daniel- I am very sorry for the pain you are feeling and do hope your prayers will be answered for the removal of this hurt. I don't know where you are headed, but home sounds like where you want your heart to be. I hope for you, only the kindest of days to come. Take Care *special huggz* ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Ron- thank you, warm words keep my hurts melting into nothingness also, so I greatly appreciate yours. Sandra- your heart is welcome to any and all I share. Marcy- a fan it is *smiling thanks Victoria- just trying to let the "real me" shine through... thank you all ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Wynter~ So special a poem written for Daniel...beautiful and heartfelt Take care Tracie~ and winged ~HUGS~ for Daniel Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Tracee- thank you, sometimes I am inspired to respond in poetic form. Daniel's poem made me feel that way the other day. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Nadthoughts, You will be glad to know that I am back home, and that we are together again. Thank you so much for your wonderful words of compassion. May God bless you. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I am very happy that events are working out for you. Hugsssssss and many days of promise ahead for you. Thank you for coming back to tell me. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
NT, a sensitive and caring poem. Well done. Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Wynter* This is so delicate and soft....your tender way with these memories make the imagery exquisite...this is truly beautiful~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Kethry- thank you *huggz BDC- ah your words were so sweet thank you ~~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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