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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2000-10-30 09:32 PM


The Silence Of Empty

The silence of empty voices
Could never continue or last,
In the loneliness here this time of night
Hearing sounds of my heart beating fast.

Drawing shadows beneath the night sky
As the moon appears, in it's glow,
Memories made, forever in mind
Are producing for me their show.

The kisses once placed on my forehead
That night when in tears, so distraught,
Your tender displaying, easing of pains,
How priceless the warmth, of yours sought.

As we began merging desires,
Embracing the depths of our hearts,
Passions tormenting, doubled the silence.
Tomorrow is today's fresh start.

Now that time goes by so swiftly,
Tracing the fading light,
Laced in shadows, 'til the morning comes,
Taken in by my dreams of the night.

For yesterday's memories sustain me,
Loving you today, all the more,
Waiting the dance in foreverland,
From the silence of empty before.

~Wynter Bliss



© Copyright 2000 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Daniel J D
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since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia
1 posted 2000-10-30 09:57 PM


Wynter Bliss,
How can I thank you for this memorable poem. This is very special, caring, and full of genuine love for another person. The pain I have endured over the last few days have been terrible. With God on my side, I put aside my hurt in prayerful moments. I am heading back home, the torment is over at least for the time being, hopefully forever. Thank you so much.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Ron K. Fox
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since 2000-10-24
Posts 925

2 posted 2000-10-30 10:02 PM


That was such a beautiful poem to write for Daniel. You have a gift. And a beautiful loving heart. You're the warmest Wynter I've ever known. Thank you for being you.

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

catalinamoon
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since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
3 posted 2000-10-30 10:42 PM


Wynter, hope you don't mind if I take this one to my heart, even though written for Daniel.

"For yesterday's memories sustain me,
Loving you today, all the more,
Waiting the dance in foreverland,
From the silence of empty before."

This is so incredibly true, and said in such a perfect way.

Sandra


Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
4 posted 2000-10-30 11:05 PM


What a heart! What a friend! What a wonderful act of kindness after reading your post to Daniel...put me on your list as a fan.  Wonderful poem.     Marcy
Victoria
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Posts 5869

5 posted 2000-10-30 11:20 PM


a beautiful poem indeed..very thoughtful NT
so nice of you..

                ~Victoria~

              


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
6 posted 2000-10-31 05:22 AM


Daniel- I am very sorry for the pain you are feeling and do hope your prayers will be answered for the removal of this hurt. I don't know where you are headed, but home sounds like where you want your heart to be. I hope for you, only the kindest of days to come.

Take Care *special huggz*
~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".

...Pope John Paul II


nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
7 posted 2000-10-31 05:28 AM


Ron- thank you, warm words keep my hurts melting into nothingness also, so I greatly appreciate yours.

Sandra- your heart is welcome to any and all I share.  

Marcy- a fan it is *smiling thanks

Victoria- just trying to let the "real me" shine through...

thank you all

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".

...Pope John Paul II


tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
8 posted 2000-11-01 05:56 AM


Wynter~
So special a poem written for Daniel...beautiful and heartfelt
Take care
Tracie~
and winged ~HUGS~ for Daniel


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
9 posted 2000-11-01 10:30 AM


Tracee- thank you, sometimes I am inspired to respond in poetic form. Daniel's poem  made me feel that way the other day.  

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".

...Pope John Paul II


Daniel J D
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since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia
10 posted 2000-11-01 07:06 PM


Nadthoughts,
You will be glad to know that I am back home, and that we are together again. Thank you so much for your wonderful words of compassion. May God bless you.


Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
11 posted 2000-11-02 05:50 AM


I am very  happy that events are working out for you. Hugsssssss and many days of promise ahead for you. Thank you for  coming back to tell me.

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".

...Pope John Paul II


Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
12 posted 2000-11-03 04:06 AM


NT,
a sensitive and caring poem. Well done.
Kethry


Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
13 posted 2000-11-03 08:21 AM


Wynter* This is so delicate and soft....your
tender way with these memories make the
imagery exquisite...this is truly beautiful~

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
14 posted 2000-11-03 02:46 PM


Kethry- thank you *huggz

BDC- ah your words were so sweet thank you

~~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".

...Pope John Paul II


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