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What Will She Do?? |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Softly the rain cascades her skin < !signature-->whispers of love flowing within gentle eyes.. lavender blue drowning in reflections of tides untrue What will she do? Steam scented raindrops on pavement of moonlight What will she do? dressed in chantilly white Rain cascades the curve of her hips..he kisses the raindrops from the softness of her lips What will she do..if it stops raining? and he fades within the mist a mist of lavender lavender blush blue What will she do? Reach high, for stars lie hidden in your soul. Dream deep, for every dream precedes the goal. [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 10-09-2000).] |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
That was beautiful. The images were great and I could really see this. I also liked the hint of sadness at the end. Elizabeth Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near... hedeservesbetter@hotmail.com |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful thoughts...James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Elizabeth...so nice of you to peek in today..  |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
loved this and the lavender blue thoughts always such beautiful images Victoria ~~smiles Maureen |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you James...nice of you to stop by |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you Mmoonchild for your visit.. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~Victoria Beautiful!!! Some truly amazing and inspiring lines flow through this. I could see the images in my mind, as if I was really there. If this is a sample of your work...you can count on me reading a lot more. Take care. ~Amy~ "The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences" |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you so much for the nice compliments..i dont have one certain style..but write in many different styles..i also write alot in dark passions ..thank you Amy..glad you liked.. |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
All right I like this very much Nice flow and style for you And please tell me what will she do |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
She will cry and go on with her life as she did before she met him..hoping to love again...thank you insect..for peeking in. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
You got to me with this one - and did it very well - I'm glad she's not giving up ~S~ ~You have to have a dream so you can get up in the morning. ~ Billy Wilder |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
but i think she did billy..thank you for peeking in.. |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Wow Victoria this is incredible...The images I see here are breathtaking. Juls |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Juls..im so glad you like it.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I loved the images you posed in this one, and also the outcome, as life goes on. Missing your poetry Victoria. |
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