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Rain Haiku |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Smile on my face Rain in dark grey skies today Puddles to play in ~SEA~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Enjoyed it!!!!!!!!  |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Lovely haiku! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Much nicer to SEA you smile MUCH nicer. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Vandana~ thanks PM~ glad you think so, thank you  Interloper~ smiles are free in the rain.... -SEA |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
lovely haiku, dear gray fills sky here, too, yet dry chill bites elbows, sharp! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
VAS~ Love it! -SEA |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Sea- loved this! excellent haiku...you are very talented. take care. ~amy~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
SEA- i wanna go puddle-jumpin'!! love this. hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Me too, me too!!! This is great SEA; makes me want to get out and play in the rain; course everyone here thinks I'm crazy cause I love it when it rains and storms...I really love storms!!! Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Amy~ thank you so much, I just started doing these today! They are so fun Vicky~ yea!! me too!  P35~ well, come on then, let's go puddle jumpin! The best kind of storm is at the ocean......ahhhhhh now THAT is heaven! -SEA |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Nicely done keep doing them and enjoy the fun!! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
addictive form, this haiku is, huh put a big smile on my face love to play in those puddles too MORE! |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
SEA, Beautiful, I may try one one day. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I hope reading this started the sky to thinking here, it better rain soon! Lovely haiku Sea girl. |
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