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Wesley the Blue
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since 1999-09-02

Posts 426
Forest Lake, MN, USA

0 posted 2000-10-09 02:28 PM

Inspired by Waverly917's poem

Sing to me softly my love
In our quiet time together
A sweet melody filled with heart
To make my spirits soar

Ill hum along with you
In my soft base voice
As I fall within you eyes
And within your heart

Together in each other’s arms
Together in perfect harmony
All that we have we share
And sing our song together

Keith W. Mullin

Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2000-10-09 02:28 PM

very nice...

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

2 posted 2000-10-09 02:36 PM

keith~
this is beautiful! keep writing and i'll keep on reading. love your work.
take care.
amy

"The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences"

Dawn Eclipse
Senior Member

since 2000-01-31

Posts 637
The Horsehead Nebula

3 posted 2000-10-09 07:02 PM

Keith, beautiful poem. It's really inspiring.

Keeup up the great work!

"Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today"
~Broadway Musical RENT~

*Cassandra Roseen*

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2000-10-10 10:20 PM

Keith,

This was wonderful and tender writing. I can see it before my eyes. Very nice.

Lone Wolf

Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2000-10-10 10:56 PM

Keith~ It's beautiful.....*SIGH*..

-SEA

Gemini
Senior Member

since 1999-12-15

Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA

6 posted 2000-10-10 11:15 PM

Keith-Very sweet song, can almost feel like dancing, I liked.

[This message has been edited by Gemini (edited 10-10-2000).]

Wesley the Blue
Member

since 1999-09-02

Posts 426
Forest Lake, MN, USA

7 posted 2000-10-11 02:24 PM

thank you all for reading and replying to my poem. It means alot to me.

Keith W. Mullin

Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you.

Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

8 posted 2000-10-11 04:35 PM

Keith*
This was beautiful...it played along softly and tenderly. Great writing~

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

9 posted 2000-10-11 04:50 PM

"As I fall within you eyes
And within your heart"

Lovely and tender sentiments Keith. The flow was sweet and melodic to match your theme. Nicely done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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