Open Poetry #10 |
Victim |
Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA |
I am a victim of my own making.. my reality temporally forsaken. mind created.. heart waited.. words said.. passion fed.. bliss indeed.. only a need.. never lies.. tears cried.. only a friend.. till the end.. nothing more.. out the door.. no big deal.. love not real.. affair dealt.. Pain felt.. no regret.. I love yet.. I will be a victim until the end. A real world love for lover and friend. If you can't make it so, you need to let it go! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh WOW!!! I love this, and the way it just cascaded down the page. Excellent! Kitty Maree [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 10-07-2000).] |
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Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA |
Maree, thank you for reading this. I'm glad you liked it. ;-) Kitty |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Great writing Kitty! I enjoyed the fast pace and flow of the words ... wonderful! Best wishes, /Kit |
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