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Spirit flight
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Spirit flight |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
It is to you that my spirit flies Over the cold blue waters And the red and gold leaves To be with you once more It is for you that my spirit flies To join in you dance Way up high in heaven To weave with you in love It is because of you that my spirit flies In its joy unbounded Feeling your love for me So much more than I ever dreamed So it is that my spirit flies to you For we are miles apart All the love kept inside spills out And takes to wing to meet with you Keith Wesley Mullin Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
DerKeit, Sir, this is wonderful! Thank you... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
Thanks for reading sunshine. Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Keith~ this is WONDERFUL!!  -SEA |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Keith....wonderful write....so glad that I caught this one. Your quill did a wonderous job for you. |
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Artistic Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 107Colorado/Rochester, NY |
Although we have yet met, I thought your poem was a wonderful read. Well done. ~Artistic~ "Dreams are the touchstones of our characters" -Henry David Thoreau |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Wow! So much romance out here tonight!  Great poem! I loved it! sp Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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Waverly917 Member
since 2000-09-23
Posts 90Hugo, MN |
Oooooo, I can just picture it! What a wonderful poem! Abra "So often times it happens that we live our lives in chains And we never even know we have the key." -Already Gone, The Eagles |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
The spirit of strength when far apart, you've captured it well, nicely written. |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Keith! Wonderful job! I enjoyed this one a lot.. plenty of images for my tiny mind. "Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today" ~Broadway Musical RENT~ *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
how very lovely...romantic and sweet |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
Thank you all for reading SEA: Glad you liked it. Mark: Thanks for stopping by, Im glad you enjoyed it. Artistic: Thank you SP: Seems to be the theame around here recently doesnt it. Thanks Waverly: Thank you. Hold on to that image, someone out there is bound to fly to you some day. Gemini: Thanks Cassers: Your mind is NOT timy Paula: well a guy has to give them some reason to stick around..... Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
how did you know that I love to fly high... great work, love it |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
Dont we all like to fly high, charisma? And what better way to do it than on the wings of love. Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful sentiments Keith! What lovely images you've woven of spirits lifting and soaring amongst the heavens to meet in love. Wonderful! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Very sweet and beautiful Keith! Well done my friend! *Krista Knutson* "Wheresoever you go, go with all your heart." -Confucious |
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