Open Poetry #10 |
The Last DanceFor You |
BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
The Last Dance ~ For You Face to face... behind closed doors, the floor is ours step closer, the music has begun spin me near till your heartbeat I feel Capture the vision, in soulful eyes as we dance this last dance BloomingRose |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Dance with me upon this moonlit night as we glide upon the wanderings of our love's delight and find what we have so long sought in the weary capsules of castles in the sand. Deb, this was beautiful and I hope you don't mind a poetic reply to your poem...it just sort of came over me.lol Good inspiration you are. You may share it with the one that the poem was for and if he don't mind I just sort of spoke for him. Once again, A very beautiful poem my friend. [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 10-07-2000).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Oh, yes!!! Kathleen |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
behind closed doors......mmmm.....I can see you....through your words... Charisma |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Mark~ Beautiful reply you composed. I don't think my special one will mind too much since it was meant to compliment the sweetness of what we have. Thank you deb |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
opps hit submit before I could finish thanking all of you... Kathleen~ do I take that to mean you like? thanks! Charisma~ I meant to add a little punch to it so I guess it worked. Thanks for reading. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
This is wonderful. . . Just wonderful. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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