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Sandcastle Of Love
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Sandcastle Of Love |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida 
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Sandcastle Of Love Lets play in the sand cover me, I'll cover you no escape from this warm embrace lets kiss till salty seas depart bequeath nothing more than imprints of two in the sand Under the sun, we become as one diamonds in sand, hand in hand our sandcastle of love BloomingRose |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
i'm a sucker for such a reserved tone ... thank you ... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Ohhh my friend, you do paint such lovely verses in the salty air and then rest them in the sparkles of diamond grains for us to touch. Wonderful penning from you with VIVID imagery. Way to go my friend. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i better type this fast and leave..wouldnt want to spoil such tender moments for the both of you  |
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Waverly917 Member
since 2000-09-23
Posts 90Hugo, MN |
As always you write with such wonderful imagry, this is very beautiful. Abra "So often times it happens that we live our lives in chains And we never even know we have the key." -Already Gone, The Eagles |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Blooming Rose-I've always loved sand, you've captured pleasant thoughts with this write, very nicely done. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Yes.....you have captured me also with the sandcastles!! Do you think that maybe poets are just big children who still love to play in the sand? I hope we never grow up!! Great writing, my friend!!  Follow your dream! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
very romantic and lovley thoughts expressed here... a tender, special moment captured well. wonderful writing take care jm |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
BloomingRose- This is beautiful and so romantic. Really enjoyed reading it. -vicky < !signature--> "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 10-08-2000).] |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
MA~ I hope that means you liked it, thank you. Mark~ Glad you like the imagery I tried to paint with words. Diamonds are a girls best friend. lol Thank you. Kaile~ Tender moments that are more a dream than reality, but then that is how hopeless poetic romantics think. lol Thank you for reading. Abra~ Thank you much! Gemini~ I live near the ocean so it's easy to write, having experianced the beauty of sand like diamonds, and the ocean breeze of salty air. Love it. Sunny~ I love sandcastles too. Such fun! JM~ Thank you. Glad you like. |
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