Open Poetry #10 |
As the Roses Bloom Today |
Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh Rex, this is so incredibly sweet and tender. Such beautiful remembrances held within a garden ... what a lovely way to gift such wonderful memories to another, making her heart a part of the current day celebrations. Beautifully composed! Best wishes, /Kit PS ... love the new picture! I still think I could have picked you out of the crowd at Delaware if we'd bumped into each other! |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
I like the way you picked out each memory and matched it with each bloom Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is very lovely... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Rex this is a lovely poem, so tender I really like this. What a wonderful way to pass on memories. Marsha |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Very lovely indeed Rex.. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
brought tears to my eyes Kathleen |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
ENJOYED IT!!!!!!! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Stepping through the garden of our fondest memories my fingers resting lightly at your waist Our thoughts together mingle at each bloom we stop to linger for not one single flower could be replaced Rex this is exquisitely tender! I love the imagery, the comparasion, and of course the beautiful graphic. It just brought it together in one awesome package. <*\\\>< I know not what the future holds, but I know Who holds the future. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Rex, Oh how wonderfully lovely this poem is! So sweet and tender! And I love the blooming rose. ~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful and tender, Rex. Very touching. Denise |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
With all the flowers there today quite a fragrance they'll display this rose shall bless the Bride and Groom forever From our garden from our mom the sweetest bloom to catch the sun We remember as your roses bloom today Rex this is quite exquisite indeed and a precious, tender and loving piece. Memories of old and new as a life together as man and wife is begun. Beautiful Rex well done Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
With all the flowers there today quite a fragrance they'll display this rose shall bless the Bride and Groom forever From our garden from our mom the sweetest bloom to catch the sun We remember as your roses bloom today Rex this is quite exquisite indeed and a precious, tender and loving piece. Memories of old and new as a life together as man and wife is begun. Beautiful Rex well done Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You've certainly done Grandma proud, Rex... and I do like the new pic as well.. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh Rex your tender words are always such a pleasure and a treat to read. |
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Mona Lisa Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 100Halifax, Nova Scotia |
What a beautiful piece! I mean that. I love roses and you used them beautifully in this poem. Great poem. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Rex, This was wonderful!! What a nice remembrance of your grandmother. Like a yearly reminder of her love. I really like this one. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Thanks everyone ... I was quite surprised to see so many replies to this tonight when I got home ... I sincerely thankyou all for your kind words ... and the pic ... although more up to date ... is poor quality ... I actually don't look that good |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
What a wonderful poem! As you can see, we ladies love flowers. And we know a beautiful flower when we see one..so don't tell us your photo is bad!!! You're the rose in our garden Rex! |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Thankyou Sharon ... most kind of you ... I'm now about as blushed as anyone gets ... and I'm trying to picture you with glasses ... very very thick glasses |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Whatch you talkin' 'bout, cutie? Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Rex~ This is just lovely ... a beautiful bouquet of thought. Very, very nice. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Denise ... LOL ... Yah sure ... kick me while I'm down ... Did Sharon put you up to this or do you just love to watch a guy squirm? Thanks Marge ... always happy to hear from you ... glad you liked it |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
hehehehe....nope, I just calls 'em as I sees 'em......but I must admit, there is something a bit endearing about a guy with the ability to blush...heheheh Denise |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Rex- This is so beautiful. Really enjoyed reading it. Nice write. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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