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vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...

0 posted 2000-09-24 03:28 AM




                              go
                              fly
                             a kite
                           while  the
                         breeze  is  just
                      right,   and   cotton
                   clouds   soften   the   sun
                take in  the beauty  of  flowers
                   and  trees ... listen  as  the
                      sweet  songs  of  birds
                         fill ..... the ..... air,
                            singing  their
                              praises to
                                heaven
                                 above
                                  when
                                  life
                                   is
                                   so
                                    c
                                     r
                                      a
                                       z
                                        y
                                       and
                                         y
                                        o
                                       u
                                      r
                                   mind's
                                      in
                                   a whirl
                                       j
                                        u
                                         s
                                          t
                                         take
                                          s
                                         o
                                        m
                                       e
                                     time
                                      a
                                       n
                                        d
                                        go
                                         f
                                        l
                                       y
                                      a
                                       k
                                        i
                                         t
                                          e


                       -vlraynes
    

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"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes






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Janet Marie
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1 posted 2000-09-24 04:52 AM


WAY WAY COOL...hey I LOVE your tail LOL
very imaginative poem..wonderful imagery
great job ....
take care
jm

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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Victoria Australia
2 posted 2000-09-24 05:38 AM


viraynes,
It's obvious the wind caught your fancy in this little piece and  you lifted poetry to new heights.
Kethry


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2000-09-24 06:57 AM


where's my kite string...here it is...
where's my comics, there they are,
balsa wood, a piece of twine
c'mon all, it's flying time

well done, and a challenge well met!

Karilea
When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
4 posted 2000-09-24 08:12 AM


Catching a breeze and flying high you are.  Wonderful.  I just love when the poets come out to shine.  You did and excellent job on verse and graphic and now well just "GO fly a KITE" or something will ya? LOLOL....
rosepetals25
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5 posted 2000-09-24 10:11 AM


vlraynes,

    I have to agree with kethry when she says she loves your tail I like this fun poem and I'm glad I stopped in



~~Tara aka rp25 :o)

Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2000-09-24 10:28 AM


Vicky~
Glad to see you caught the winds of inspiration !
WONDERFULLY DONE !

Now ... you've got the fire ! ! !
Love it !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com



Victoria
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7 posted 2000-09-24 12:39 PM


And a lovely kite it is..
Kit McCallum
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8 posted 2000-09-24 12:46 PM


Wonderful Vicky! What a fun challenge this is ... you met it beautifully with this creative piece, really well done!!!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...
9 posted 2000-09-24 10:34 PM



Janet Marie-
   thanks so much for the enthusiastic reply.
   so glad you enjoyed this.  

kethry-
   wow...thanks for the wonderful response.
   glad you like this.  

sunshine-
   lol...you have a great time flying that
   kite.     thanks so much for your
   the joyful response.  

mark-
   lol...yeah...maybe i will just go fly a
   kite...or something...care to join me?
   thanks for the encouraging words, and
   for a really fun challenge.  

rosepetals25-
   i'm glad you stopped in too.  really
   glad you enjoyed this.  

Marge, my friend-
   wow!  coming from you, the 'queen of
   creativity', these words mean so much.
   thank you so much for the enthusiasm
   and encouraging words.  

Victoria-
   glad you like it.  thanks for reading.  

kit-
   thank you so much.  you've put a smile
   on my face with your kind words.  yes,
   this was a really fun challenge.    glad
   you enjoyed this.  

hugs to all,
       -vicky  


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes


insect
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since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014

10 posted 2000-09-24 10:50 PM


Great!
I like this one.
Kites should be at the top! (click)

dgvarner
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High Springs, Florida
11 posted 2000-09-25 04:23 AM


HEEHEE!! i love this tricks!  how cool!!  lets do--lets do go fly a kite!!  wouldnt that be fun..just stop in the middle of everything and go play for a while...  

great job on this one!!  (you'll have to teach me this formatting stuff!)  

hugs, dg


theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper

Elizabeth Santos
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Pennsylvania
12 posted 2000-09-25 06:42 AM


Beautifully done!
And a very cute poem to go with the presentation
I love kites and loved the poem
Liz

vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...
13 posted 2000-09-25 05:23 PM



insect-
   lol...thank you.    glad you like this.

dg-
   got my kite and string...ready when you
   are, so let's go fly a kite...lol  
   really glad you like this.     thanks
   for the enthusiastic response. (((hugs)))

elizateth-
   thanks so much for the kind response.
   really glad you enjoyed this.  

love you all,
        -vicky




"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



Marge Tindal
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14 posted 2001-06-30 08:24 PM


Go get 'em ... cool breeze !

~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

passing shadows
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15 posted 2004-04-18 07:30 PM


well done!
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