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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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Looking at you and wondering why, Why you have changed your heart, and don't even try, to explain why you were mad at me, and make me cry Looking at you, with a broken heart, Don't even know, why we were fallen apart. Looking at you while I try to understand How our sweet love is forced to an end, You promised a cherish heaven on earth, And all what you do is trying to hurt. Still I can't let you slip away. Don't want to say goodbye, this way. Please explain what I have done wrong. And why your love for me is gone. Looking at you, while my heart still cry... My love for you was never a lie... I cry, and I cry… Just wondering why... Looking at you my special friend, Please don't forget the time that we spend. The passions of love that we shared together, Precious moments I have marked that either. Looking at you, while my heart still cry... My love for you was never a lie... And I cry…. I still cry… Still wondering why... But I will try, to say goodbye. Charisma. I have edit this one too, learning so much to read all yours, correct hopely all my faults but still hard to do when english isn't my native tongue  with other words I have no regrets to join netpoets |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Love and heartache are the universal language here and you spoke them with the pen of a poet. Fantastic work and my heart is left with a tear for the saddness woven here. Welcome to Passions once again...you are a most enjoyable addition to these "walls"~ |
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jlocke Member
since 2000-09-10
Posts 169CC,TX |
Welcome to Passions my friend, This is so beautiful! I only wish I had the ability to read it in your native tongue. I've heard that alot can be lost in translations. However, I see nothing lost here. You have conveyed your love so well. btw-I visited your homepage: The art and poetry I found there is unmatchable. Your talent exceeds that of the great poets of the past, and I am sure your name, your poems will be known and read for centuries to come. I invite all others who have not visited Charisma's homepage to do so. It will not be a waiste of your time! and your young men shall see visions, and your old men shall dream dreams (Acts 2:17) |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
thank you butterflies don't cry, for your lovely words, it means alot for me, cause I am still unsure of my style of writing and hidden faults, but can't resist to post my poems here. jLock, know Im blushing through your words of kindness, I am glad that you visit my homepage and like it a bit. I also reply your question through e-mail. love Charisma |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Yeah I can relate to this, love it Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful expression of your feelings..Sorry for your pain...rejection hurts in so many different ways...James |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
rejection is more than bad enough - rejection without understanding is that much worse - - you should know - that (I believe) we've all been through it - and repeating it does not make it any easier. - beautifully written Charisma - your heart is in in [[[hugs]]] |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Maria Byrne: I am glad that you love it  )James: so true, rejection of hurt in different ways, they caused heartache, and keep me writing )Wilfred Yeats: no repeating it makes it not easier, thats why I wrote it down, expressions from my heart, to handle the pain when Im there. thank you for stopping by |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Heartaches and love will always walk hand in hand I believe until that magical day when life just gets so perfect. A long time coming but it does come so don't give up. Love you style of writing also and please....you do great in your translation. So wonderful to have you here. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Mark: thank you for your wonderful words, and hey I am a survivor....so I don't give up...*sigh* even when it cost a lot of energy .. .....and thank you that you make feel me so welcome *hug*Charisma |
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pandora Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 184 |
enjoyed the poem. what is your native tongue? |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Pandora: I am glad that you enjoyed it, and to answer your question, I live in Holland, that makes my tongue dutch...but come original from Indonesia and I speak that language too.. Charisma |
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Ladycat
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
Wonderful words.. They just flow out at me. WOW.. Welcome and don't ever be afraid. Passions people treat their poets with respect and love. Love Always, Lady Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ Such feelings from your heart are poetic enough to touch another ... that's the beauty of your poetry. In this family of friends and poets we have many kind hearts to be touched. We're so pleased that you are here. I've visited your web site and it is simply lovely ... I will return soon. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
LadyCat: you are realy kind and I enjoy it every day to spend my time here, I have noticed that the most members are kindly and treat you with respect, and feels good. Marge Tindal  wow* your words touch my heart now, *blush*....thank you for this great compliment. and btw. I had allready visit your homepage, if you haven't noticed it, and sign your guestbook either. ((hugs))) Charisma |
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