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Kill me softly-Holloween Fun
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Kill me softly-Holloween Fun |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
Sensitive skin upon my neck comes alive the cut you made which now flows a small trail of blood my life in your hands, your grin wanting more. You kiss me true as a lover of old hands carress the bindings which keep me held here for your amusement my naked skin blind folded and cold let death bring me in. Another kiss, as you sit there in pride watching the life run from me as I die, you wrap your arms around me in tight embrace lips to the wound you drink with loving grace. I see my life go as images come to mind fleeing as switfly as my heart beats for time I hear your moan as you fall to my shoulder killing me softly with your touch. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I see my life go as images come to mind fleeing as switfly as my heart beats for time I hear your moan as you fall to my shoulder killing me softly with your touch. ============== damn..only YOU could make dying at the hands of a vampire be this SENSUAL ... all this time i been chasing poets... maybe i need to shake up some bats LOL hey....love this ... so bite me...LOL later-sensual-neck-gator me |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
great writing... I think it must be scary to celeberate Halloween....we don't have that here...but can taste the sphere in your poem.  enjoyed reading itCharisma |
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Waverly917 Member
since 2000-09-23
Posts 90Hugo, MN |
In all the ways there are to die, this sounds like the way to go. I love it. Abra |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Something about this that is very erotic! Much enyoyed!! Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Martinque Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 69 |
Vampires seem to have all the fun! |
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