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When Sarah Sings
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When Sarah Sings |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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When Sarah Sings Twirling into twilight Swirls of synchronicity Indigo eyes a skylight, Educing mystery. Shyness for now withdrawn Limber in her shadow dance Nocturnal to arrival of dawn Spellbound in languid trance. Preceding the time of maturity Obstacles adulthood brings, Shining in perfect purity All smiles, when Sarah sings. © 2000 Corinne Bailey |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
I could imagine that she sings just like an angel.  Park |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Oh, I can see her twirling and singing! What a perfectly lovely picture! This is a keeper. I hope you don't mind if I put it in my favorites file. I used to have a precious little daughter named Sarah who sang too. Beautifully written. The spiritual wind that holds survivors aloft, plants the seeds from which bloom new hope ... R.J.G. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh and isn't this just so beautiful!! Loved it Corinne  |
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fool Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 61 |
This is simply lovely,thats all I have to say. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you, Park, she does, too! Rosemary, I think that is one of the nicest things anyone has said, I would be honored. Thank you, Dark Angel and Fool! Coirnne |
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Fred Hobbs Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 329Tallahassee, Florida, US |
Corrine, you've said it perfectly. They grow up so quickly and somehow don't sing as much anymore. Fine poem. |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
This is simply beautiful Corrine! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thanks, Fred and Debbie! Corinne |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
can see the pirouettes - hear the sweet voice - well done ~S~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Corinne, This really sang to me, I wanted it to go on and on. I loved it! Kathleen |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
very beautiful indeed Corinne.. A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is beautiful!!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ This is so tender ... I can hear Sarah's song. Lovely, hon. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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