Dedicated to the guy who showed me real love.

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Open Poetry #10

Dedicated to the guy who showed me real love.

prinzezz16_4eva
New Member

since 2000-10-04

Posts 1

0 posted 2000-10-04 05:32 PM

A Breathe of life storming through my heart,
Bringing with it beauty and love.
Unblinding me, and proving to my heart,
that there is real love.
Unchaining the bonds of hurt and pain,
that for so long have kept my heart from love.
You my love have found the key to my heart,
that I threw away so long ago.
You my sweet have the missing peice to complete
this puzzle of my life.
You are the dream that I never thought
could ever come true.
You have changed me since you brought
your vibrant love into my life.
You have brought back the light inside of me,
and you've shown me that I deserve more.
You've ended my search,
my journey is through, because my sweet,
my love I finally found you.

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

1 posted 2000-10-04 10:41 PM

Very nice poem! Congrats on finding love!

sp

Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier

Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite

since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

2 posted 2000-10-04 10:49 PM

Welcome to Passions! This is a lovely show of your love and your heart...hope to see more of your work in the future.

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

3 posted 2000-10-04 11:22 PM

beautiful simply beautiful!
there's nothing like true love. you have
penned it beautiful here. look forward
to reading more of your poems.
take care.
amy

"The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences"

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

4 posted 2000-10-04 11:45 PM

~Sigh~ finding the ONE, how beautifully you have proclaimed that....

Waverly917
Member

since 2000-09-23

Posts 90
Hugo, MN

5 posted 2000-10-05 01:57 PM

How absolutely wonderful to have found true love!

Beautiful poem! Welcome to Passions!

Abra

"So often times it happens that we live our lives in chains
And we never even know we have the key."
-Already Gone, The Eagles

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2000-10-06 04:14 PM

Enjoyed reading this very much..James

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

7 posted 2000-10-06 04:24 PM

very nice poem..enjoyed reading it...
keep up the good work

Charisma

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