Open Poetry #10 |
Right Here With Me |
kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
So far away you are from me The Miles keep us apart But no distance do I feel You are right here in my Heart. Each heart beat bring us closer To the day we will entwine Our hearts, our Love, Our Souls Forever please be mine. With the dawn of every day I awake with a smiling face Knowing as the hours pass Soon our lives will be in place. As day turns into darkness The stars in the sky so Bright They know that it will not be long Till we are holding each other tight. As I reach out my hand to you Lay down here by my side Come travel in my dreams with me For my Love I cannot hide. -------------- You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face and show the world all the love in your heart Then people are gonna treat you better You're gonna find, yes you will That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Love this one very much..nicely written.. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
hey you so nice to see you so happy my friend... this sweet sincere poem is full of your promise and hope found in long distance love... the love shortens the distance take care K, jm |
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Waverly917 Member
since 2000-09-23
Posts 90Hugo, MN |
I am in a long distance relationship right now and your poem is so true!!!! Even though you may be far away, it really doesn't feel that far. Abra "So often times it happens that we live our lives in chains And we never even know we have the key." -Already Gone, The Eagles |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
I loved this...tender, sincere and beautifully written~ |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Thanks all for your replies. Long distance is a hard thing to do. But I have 21 more days before I see my Love and I can hardly wait . But it never seems that far for he is so in my heart always. |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
I was recently apart from my husband for almost six months! Every couple of weeks, one of us would fly the 2000 mile trip for a visit but it went by too fast and was never enough. I grew to love him more with each passing day and like you, counted the days until we could be together again! Thanks for sharing a great poem! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Kit, I'm threading this one to my library... With that said, may I add how much this poem is soooooo sweet... Coco |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
kitkat this is such a lovely poem, I really like this. Physically it might be far away, but when he's in your heart, he couldn't be nearer. Marsha |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes very nice....James |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love to read it and enjoyed it ) very nice Charisma |
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