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a dying flame...(anorther one for Mark's Graphic Challenge)
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a dying flame...(anorther one for Mark's Graphic Challenge) |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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a dying flame trapped within a wall of glass as i stare into the fading fire it begins to speak to my heart...............it tells of a lifetime of hopes and dreams never to be fulfilled...........yet it speaks of an undying spirit- a spirit that will never stop believing as i listen...i become lost...lost within the fire and the story it tells......... the voice slowly........fades........as the flame gives in to death.........but its story of undying faith will forever burn within my soul... -vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 10-05-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ What a wonderfully mesmerizing write. Excellent use of the flame ... MARVELOUSLY done !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Vicky----I love this in all it's glow. As if the beauty of your words were not enough, you give us the beauty of your poets/artists flame. I love these little graphic poems and you should have entered this one in my challenge....well I will accept it as that anyway....way cool. I have done alot of these from simple hearts to guitars but yours really and truely shines. I love the flicker you addes in the crest of it. And as for the verse.....faith and true desire will get you the happiness you seek. sorry to have rambled.  |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- wow...thank you so much. so glad you enjoyed this. (((hugs))) to you, my friend. Mark- thank you so much for all the kind words. i always appreciate hearing from you...so feel free to ramble anytime. really glad you like this. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
wow, I love this one There are enough colours in the world, To paint your own dreams, You won't get them, Till you try. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Maria- thanks so much for reading. glad you enjoyed this. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
WOW! this is awesome tricks!! i'm loving the way you did this! and this poem is a wonderful one..good flame memories perhaps i'll dig out my old flame..  heeheekeep up the way cool formatting!! hugs, dg she doesnt want the kind of love she can live with--she wants the kind she cant live without -clint black |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- hey there! really glad you like this one. you should try this 'cool formatting'...it's lots of fun to do. love ya, tricks "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*wow* this is real great, I really enjoyed it..good one Charisma |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Vicky, this is awesome. It must be the best graphic poem I've seen. Well done. Dee |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Charisma- Thank you so much for all your replies to my poems. really glad you enjoyed this one. Dee- Thank you so much for the kind words. If you like these graphic formats, you should go back in this forum a bit and find the rest of the ones for Mark's challenge...you'll find alot of really cool stuff. Marge and Mark in particular are masters at this. glad youenjoyed. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Wow Vicky, I am never going to be into these leagues but boy do I love reading these and looking at you guys do your craft, thank you for sending this to me, I loved it! "Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
OOOOOOOOO! YES!  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I stumbled into your cupboard this evening, and found a lamp burning - what a great piece this was Vicky, we need to do another challenge like this. |
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