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Open Poetry #10

Moonlight Tangerine

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

0 posted 2000-10-04 12:34 PM

I will meet you by the winding river
where ripples flow downstream
please wait and i will meet you
where moonlight is soft tangerine
I will try to be there, and if i cannot be
do not wait forever, no not for me

Life will go on as always
the moon will always shine
and i will sit upon the ole rock
and dream of love devine

So do not wait forever
in shadows of the willow tree
because i can only be there
in my dreams of reality
so do not wait forever
not forever just for me

I will dream of you
wherever you may be
under midwest heavens
under stars of eternity

And in the reflection
of rippled moonlight sheen
maybe, maybe next time
in moonlight tangerine

Reach high, for stars lie hidden in your soul.
Dream deep, for every dream precedes the goal.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2000-10-04 01:29 AM

Victoria~
I just love this title ...
The image of that special moonlight glow jumps into my mind.

What a softly wistful penning of the heart.
I enjoyed this.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

2 posted 2000-10-04 09:28 AM

Thank you Marge..and for peeking in..appreciate your comments..

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

3 posted 2000-10-04 10:33 AM

Me too! On both of Marge's comments. Enjoyed this much.

jwesley

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

4 posted 2000-10-04 10:36 AM

thank you so much.. glad you enjoyed..

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

5 posted 2000-10-04 10:42 AM

i had to read this one ...
the beautiful title caught my eye ...
and the poem's beauty and imagery
equals the title ...
wonderful writing
well done
take care
jm

There are places inside our souls -
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts -
that need to be loved this much.
~jm~

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

6 posted 2000-10-04 12:59 PM

Thank you so much JM, sweet of you to say..

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