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Now, A Plea (just being me)
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Now, A Plea (just being me) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Here is another, just for you, rhymes in time, long overdue... I heard of whispers in the dark, and romps of dreams and sting of spark, Tales of shivers up the spine and tongues that taste of aged wine... fingertips to feather--chilled, loveliness of love fulfilled, Rumors, have I heard of this-- to taste a soul upon the lips... I listen for the answers true, and weep because I'm missing you... each idea, a new thing born, shared with you, and left forlorn. I heard of love-- did not believe, 'til I met you, and you did leave. A prison now of memory... a prisoner you've made of me. Once more, please, just wipe my tears, still my shaking calm my fears... If it's but a night of free... oh come with me, pretend, I'll be as close to her I can achieve, for you, I'd give up being me. |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
wow...... This was realy awsome. You must have felt something realy special for him. I hope that everything works out well for you. Keith W. Mullin Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
serenity, for you I'd give up being me. What a poem. Bravo! Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Once more, please, just wipe my tears, still my shaking calm my fears... If it's but a night of free... oh come with me, pretend, I'll be as close to her I can achieve, for you, I'd give up being me. Sending hugs to you for this one my friend. Can overnight a roofer or two also if ya like!!!!!!  Loved this one from beginning to end. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
quote: 'tis a high price to pay my friend. . . just be who you are. . . always. . . beautiful. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Serenity~ I think this is my favorite of yours and I have to put this in my library. I just love this.  -SEA |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
serenity, I loved this poem... but I must say whoever it is isn't worth changing what a lovely person you are. Please remember that. < !signature--> ~~Tara aka rp25 [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 10-03-2000).] |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
If you ever stop being you, I'm gonna hunt you down and twist your ears!!!! No man in his right mind would EVER want you to not be you...for you are you-nique!!!  Have you ever imagined a world with no hypothetical situations? |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
LOL..watch out Deer...she knows wrastlin moves WHAT DID YOU PICK FROM YOUR FENCE GARDEN TODAY .... COOL CUCUMBERS????? RHYMING RADISHES??? CADENCE CORN??? PERFECT POETRY POTATOES??? MY MY MY I do so love this poem... its SOOOO COOOLL i gotta wear shades to read it  *winkie winkie* and ya KNOW.... this line..is now MINE ... "for you, I'd give up being me." OH MAN!!!!!!!! hey...we're twins we share everything.. so come do YOUR dished in MY sink LOL YOU ROCK in this one baby me |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
JMHO - but no one - nothing - No love - should EVER take away you're being you. (This is not to say the poem isn't lovely and powerul and perfect and understandable - i.e. - hyperbole by way of expressing the strength of your love and caring. But men can be pretty stupid at times and abusive to those who allow themselves to be carpets. - I talk too much. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Serenity, Powerful poetry here my friend. I like this one. But, you know . . . if he really loves you, you won't have to be anyone except yourself!! Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hugs to heart, each and every one...and worry not, I lied...I can't help but being me, I've been studying the understudy all my life....grins, and love to all me friends...and Wils, no apologies necessary, carpet is a good metaphor, but don't forget the magic...I just miss him. [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 10-04-2000).] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Serenity~ Great piece of work and I know deep down you know who you are and want to be, definately not someone else...your perfect the way you are  Luv ya Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thank you so much, Tracie, you seem to keep slipping by me...but yes, this one was written for a special one, especially missed...BIG SIGH....and Janet, a big YES on the CUCUMBERS...LOL [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 10-04-2000).] |
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