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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Bright sunlight filters in Today I think I may win Outside it's a beautiful day I am ready come what may My heart is feeling light No longer dark as night As the dark clouds disappear A rainbow hangs near Brilliant colors now unite Amongst the clouds of white The sky is very blue Life seems so new The flowers shall bloom Rescued from impending doom They have come to life In spite of recent strife This smile on my face Is not out of place A new day is here No longer will I fear The future shall unfold I will cast a new mold My heart beats strong In rhythm with my song Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
LW~ This ROCKS!!! I love how positive you are. Excellent!  -SEA |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~LW,...hi you. This poem is beaming. I love it's positivity, and shine. Smiles here for you. Take care of yourself. *Peace. [This message has been edited by SpitFire (edited 10-03-2000).] |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Wondeful from begining to end, such a positive outlook from you. Take care!"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
I loved this. There can be nothing to compare with the hope that a brand new day brings. Keith W. Mullin Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Happy to see your sun shining |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Loved the rhymes, and the message is so encouraging! Great write!! Loved it! sp  Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
this was so inspiring, Sometimes we forget about the beginning of a new day, how everything is revived once again, How the sun is destined to come up at a certain time this is a beautiful poem lonewolf. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Now this one is full of spirit....wow....such optimism. Great write. |
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Rosalind Palafox
Registered
MemberPosts 88 |
I enjoyed this poem.It's good to come back and read your poems. "Love knows hidden paths."-German proverb |
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Artistic Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 107Colorado/Rochester, NY |
So nice and so positive... how we need a bit of positiveness everyday! ~Artistic~ "Dreams are the touchstones of our characters" -Henry David Thoreau |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
LW~ Great to read hon, glad to see your world is becoming a brighter one  Sunny days Bright sky up ahead There is always A new beginning Carefree ways And lazy days Beautiful faces grinning The sky is blue The sun is shining Everything is O'kay Not a care in the world No worries at all It's such a lovely day Everyone's cheerful Smiling and free No moan's no grunt's today If everyday could be this way What a wonderful world it would stay Be happy, take care always Love Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Dawn always brings with it a new promise. . . Well done. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Beautiful work my friend...it's always a pleasure to see you write in the sunshine~ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A very positive poem indeed, Great work LW Glad for you |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
 Just for you my friend Wise man say "Those who live in the past let the future sneak up on them" and "Make each moment count, it could be your last" |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What an absolutely positive and uplifting piece Lone Wolf ... I adored the powerful message and "wake to a new day" feel this leaves me with! Wonderful smiles this brought this morning. OK, so now can I say the Lord works in mysterious ways, because here I was feeling a little blue this morning, read your wonderful poem to lift my spirits, then see Jeffrey has posted my painting I did of my Shepherd here! I'm not sure if that was accidental or purposeful ... but you've BOTH given me a smile a mile wide this morning, LOL! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
"A new day is here No longer will I fear" Much strength to you on your new day! I'm so glad that the hues of life are brightening for you!  ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you to all who took the time to read and reply to this piece. I had a long week at work last week and did not get a chance to thank everyone individually. You are al appreciated very much!!! Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Thank you for putting this big smile on my face though my day is almost over it is filled with hope. wonderful poem and great outlook thank you "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Brian, You are welcome and I am always happy to put a smile on anyone's face. Thank you so much. Happy you enjoyed this one. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
the beautiful title says it all... wonderful to see the promise in your words. stronger each day ... great write LW later-walk in the sunshine-gator jm |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
I need to bookmark this and read it in the morning when my brain is set on sleepy/tantrum mode. Thank you for adding a little sunshine to my night, Wolf! ~ Beth |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
The sun always seems a little brighter after a storm, doesn't it? You made my morning, Jenn. Thanks. |
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jennie may* Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 122 |
very inspirational--I like to see happy poems once in a while! Beautiful work "We have all these galaxies inside of us. And if we don't enter those in art, then I don't understand the point in doing anything."-Sam Shepard |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
JM . . . Thank you and yes, each day it builds. Beth . . . LOL, whatever works for you!! Happy to cheer your night. Trev . . . It is always brightest then my friend. Glad to make your morning. Jennie . . . Thank you very much. I try to keep positive. Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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