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some tail-spin... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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In-sanity when reasoning is so crazy like a lunatic tornado howling like these cold winter winds -- a top in an unending spin you win again and yet again pointless madness readiness to move in trembling quivers the last defrosted leaf in final freefall aimless sadness where do we go from here what do we want from here troubled mind hunts non-existent reasons amid complete chaos hopeless depressed purge the odd thoughts kill the virus you win again and yet again hold me kiss me thrill me devour my brain help me survive please let me be the child again a thumb-sucking ignorant lamb blissfully unaware feed me all those wonderful dreams of love, life, peace, of hope - once again you win again and yet again I resign, but I won't ever quit, never quit! I will win once atleast one time... ?? !! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sudhir this is a wonderfully crafted poem.. your thoughts flow freely and are very open and perceptive....I hope this is not a spat but just a friendly one....the truth is you win now! because you handled this with a flair of class and that isn't easily matched and you win because you can write like this ..can't lose...your old poet friend..ethome |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sudhir, Sudhir beloved one, I may win, but this is a winner. Btw you could be a child with me anyday. write on Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
A rollercoaster of emotions that you took me on Sud..this is excellent...your thoughts flowed and swept me up in them waiting for the landing...and you landed on your feet my friend...just as it is meant to be  Love having you back here!!! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
ethome, my friend... thank you so much... no, this is not some spat on somebody or anybody... but just thinking about in a tailspin of uncertainty... trying to be non-judgemental and avoid anger to get the better of a seemingly hopeless situation... just trying to feel that feeling... I don't know its hard to express what I was thinking ... but one of my friends was feeling quite depressed about a particular incident and couldn't come out of that situation easily... and I put myself thinking as if I was him... ... ... O Kethry, how much would I love to do that....  Thanks...O dear butterflies~, my friend, thanks... it feels great to be needed to be present, and this family is the greatest.... Regards to all, Sudhir |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sweet Sudhir Spinning emotions friend...very well penned thoughts ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Tracie, Thank you so much for coming by... regards, sudhir |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Sudhir, your words are wonderful. Wandering and yet making sense, like thoughts just spilt out. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Dee, it feels so good to know that you have been reading my poetry, from times long gone by... thanks a lot... Regards, Sudhir |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
deep write...I miss these...good reading today |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
thanks for coming by, my friend... much appreciated... regards sudhir |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
I very much enjoyed the read PoetFriend Sudhir... Smiles2u *~coco~* |
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