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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Doubt Doubt if you will the stars Say they shine not over you Illuminating washing away fears Tell me you see them not And I will believe you Doubt Heaven and it’s entire mystic Speak of angels drowned in sorrow Flowers of fragrance grow never Rainbows are merely black and white And I shall hush to listen Doubt time moves without remorse Whisper to me there is no future That yesterday we did not love Today you think not of me And I will understand Condemn yourself and all to hell In the pit of gloom I go too For this my friend, never doubt Where you are is where I’ll be And I am always here for you Marina Oct 2 2000 It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Marina, this style seems a little different for you. You've done a amazing job here. Doubt all but the fact that you will be there to... Very powerful message. Bravo... James |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marina, what a promise, what a passion, what a girl you are. Be well Kethry. "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Touching...so very touching.. I was having lots of doubt about me and Mina Friday and Saturday...Sunday was a nicer day for me...happy times shared with her...James |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Kethry, I just wanted to say......Thank you......for such a sweet compliment.  Marina |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Doubt time moves without remorse Whisper to me there is no future That yesterday we did not love Today you think not of me And I will understand Condemn yourself and all to hell In the pit of gloom I go too For this my friend, never doubt Where you are is where I’ll be And I am always here for you =================== Marina , I'd like to Ditto P-man compliments .. this is very well conceived, written, and expressed ... one of your best... love the imagery laced with the emotions you already know I love the message it speaks so perfectly. later-stand by your man-gator  jm |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Marina~ Wow, my friend! I must say that I love this side of you! This is incredible. I am moved by this one deeply, and I thank you for sharing! Love Ya~ ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
This is absolutlely beautiful Marina. . . The style is different for you and it suits you. . . and the words are superb. . . I know where this one is coming from. . . which makes it all the more excellent. . . You know that you're growing everyday don't you my friend? As a poet, and as a person. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Speaking from your heart and showing the pain and agony of sticking with a love that you share with one even when they cannot turn to you or betray the feelings that are there. This really speaks out and I am hoping that I didn't misread it but I saw a love willing to forgive if only given the chance to shine again. Excellent read and if I misread it them please feel free to let me know....I would like to know that I understand it my friend. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Marina, I am so impressed with this one...this is truly a pledge of faithful friendship...it touched me deeply. |
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weaubleau Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 101MO |
wonderful writing...with so much power. it reminds me of a mother's love for her child. i loved it. |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
Marina, this really shows a heart worth all the world, a heart that beats true and clear, a heart that has opened to see and love. I hope you find what you have been searching for....... Michael |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
James, thank you. It is a little different for me. I am glad my message was very clear, thanks you...... Kethry, thank you again my friend. Your comments mean a great deal to me. James, you stick with Mina. I have a good feeling about her.... Jan, thanks girl! My friend is very special to me and I will always stand beside him. Terry, my sweet friend. Thank you so much. I am glad I could share this with you. ") Sven, thank you Mark, your posts and comments are always welcome my friend. Thank you so much. Serenity, I am glad you enjoyed it. Thank you... weaubleau, thank you for your wonderful comments. Michael, your words have touched me deeply. Thank you for seeing my heart in that light, but it is my friend's heart, that inspired my pen to write. Thank you so very much my friend. It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Martinque Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 69 |
This is so beautiful........ A lucky friend you have! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"Tell me you see them not And I will believe you" Powerfully written Marina! There's such conviction and strength of trust flowing through these lines ... very nicely penned! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Martinque, thank so very much. Although it is I who is lucky. Kit, thank you. I am so glad you enjoyed it. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Martinque Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 69 |
Back for a second read........ |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Doubt if you will the stars Say they shine not over you Illuminating washing away fears Tell me you see them not And I will believe you' Beautiful verse of loyalty! I loved it! sp Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Martinque, thank you once again. Snowpants, thank you. Loyality in a friendship is very important to me. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
I am soooo impressed with this poem and can only add that I ditto what KITT has expressed as well the 2 verses she quoted are the ones that clawed thru my thoughts in this read Bottom line is...the expression is exquisite Coco |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
CocO, thank so very much. I always enjoy your comments...... Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Passions Voice Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291Michigan |
Just searching a little. Saw your name and liked it. Wanted to see what your writing was like. I really liked this poem, it says a lot. Hope to see more from you, you are obviously a woman in love. I used to know what that was like. passion is life. . . |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Passions Voice, thank you for the read and post. Welcome to Passions! I will look for your work. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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