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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Longing for you to be close to me to reach out and touch your femininity. Desiring to please you whatever you ask of me your desires will be my hearts decree. Eagerly wanting your sweet kiss and the softness of your warm caress. Needing the moisture from your lips and the gentleness within your fingertips. Yearning to explore the mysteries of you. The treasure in the hidden valley's wanting to be discovered. The pleasure in the mountain dew waiting to be uncovered. And now you are beside me beckoning me to touch the beauty I see. All the beauty that I see becomes the beauty embracing and touching me. A touch becomes an embrace as sensual lips come face to face. All the lovely beauty I have admired now sensual pleasure to touch and acquire. My lips feel the warmth of your kiss as my fingers embrace silky feminine bliss. We touch, we taste, we kiss, we embrace. New lovers eye to eye and face to face. Silky sensations to explore sensual feelings begging for more. Magic moments shared by you and I. We allow not a wasted moment to pass us by. Looking, touching and tasting every inch of beauty within our shared embrace. We reach together for more poignant pleasure. Ernestly longing to discover the newfound beauty of each other found within the desires of these two lovers. Jameslee@October02,2000 MinaandJames [This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 10-03-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
James, it is nice to see you so much in love and having it returned to you. I have one word for you.........."HOT" my man "HOT" |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*sigh*.....wish that I was the woman in your poem. my heart beat like crazy reading your words, so I can't deny that I like it. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
This is certainly a beautiful love poem, and so well done, that I am going to go back and read it again....and then again!! Love the erotic touches!!  Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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jinxed Member
since 2000-09-27
Posts 86 |
wow this is so beautiful it almost hurts to read when you are all alone...sigh...great writing |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Mark, Charisma, Sunny and Jinxed for your lovely words. Sunny thank you for that big beating heart..my heart beats like that when I'm with Mina...I feel so comfortable with her...James |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
James my friend. . . what can I say? Mina is one incredibly lucky woman. . . this poem is incredible!! You deserve it my friend. . . be happy. . .  --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
James~ I just love this, not only is it totally hot but it is incredibly sweet. I'm happy for you, you sweet guy -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Sven and Sea..I am one incredibly blessed man...and I know it....James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
This is my favorite James..love it.. |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Wow James this is one great poem. I am sooooooo happy for you. Love, love, sweet wonderful love. Looks good on ya my friend. Juls |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
James....you are such a special man you deserve all this and so much more. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I appreciate your response Victoria, Juliet, and Paula...you are very nice...James |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
James-Truely a passionate piece from your heart, I liked it very much. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
It's so wonderful and refreshing to read the beautiful discoveries you find within your love James ... she is a fortunate woman to have captured your heart with such passion and promise. Beautifully written! Best wishes, /Kit |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Gemini and Kit for the warm responses...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! you wrote long stuff back in these days! |
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