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Goodbye to You
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Goodbye to You |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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You made me laugh, you helped me cry but now it's time to say goodbye I played my games, revealed my heart too much together so now we part. Be well Kethry < !signature--> "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- [This message has been edited by Kethry (edited 10-06-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
So few words, yet very nicely stated with a perfect flow ... very nice Kethrey!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
it is always a sad moment to say goodbye. hope you will be well *warm hug* Charisma |
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The Lonely Stranger Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 361Upstate, NY, USA |
I love a poem that hits hard & gets out..... a very touching goodbye, and a bit more from my perspective. However I won't discuss it in a public forun |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kethry,this is such a clear example of quality not quantity. Very well written, I really like this. Take care Marsha |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
A poor choice that's badly made does not win you accolades a heart the pierced can only cry so this is why it is goodbye. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
This better not be a good-bye to Passions and all of us or I will come drag you back in here kicking and screaming all the way. Do ya hear me?? Please tell me it ain't that at all. Will ya please? |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Mark, it is so, so must it be though I am sorry to set you all free I'm too bound by what I see Passions is not the place for me Lynne "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Lynne, I am sorry to see your wit and style leave these graceful and sometimes humorous walls. Please feel free to e-mail me, should you wish to talk. Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
dont know your reasons ... change comes in like the seasons go if you must , know we wish youd stay take your time, come back and play the doors always open, were always here your poetry made us smile, we hold you dear. take Care Kethry... and remember.... the same door you leave thru will let you back in  jm |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Kethry, why must you leave? I hope you don't give up on us all this easy? You've got lots of spirit.....so c'mon, talk to me ok? Give me some reasons, email me. <*\\\>< I know not what the future holds, but I know Who holds the future. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I shall indeed be sorry to see you go, as with all your work you do it in style. Take care! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This makes me very sad, I too almost left because I wanted to study poetry. What I didn't realize is that here, I see the heart and soul of it more than any textbook. Take care of yourself and you can always come back! Kathleen |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
NO NO NO Kethry...not goodbye...until we meet again if you must but NEVER goodbye. [This message has been edited by Paula Finn (edited 10-08-2000).] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Kethry~ A lot said in those few words....please don't say goodbye Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Kethry, You are flying on the wings of your heart, then when it rests, come back again. I will miss your wonderful poetry while you're gone Love ya Liz |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
kethry i dont do goodbye sorry. so i'll just say see ya around. take care and be well. i will miss your work and you very much. i just started reading some of your work a few weeks ago but in a short time i can honestly say you got a lot of dignity and wisdom to your work. thanks for being so honest and sharing it with all of us.take care. amy "The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sometimes that's best |
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