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vandana
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0 posted 2000-10-06 07:20 PM


In time ,
You will find love
That brings you happy,
And In time
will bring love
That cares for you deeply,
In time,
You will find
That you want,
In time ,
You will find peace and understand,
Yes,
In time ,
You will find ,
Everything will be alright,
In time,
You will see the light
In your eyes,
In time,
You will find it all,
Yes ,In time,
You will find find all the answer
you been looking for,
In time,
You will find it all,
In time.........

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Moon Dust
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1 posted 2000-10-06 08:31 PM


As time goes by it can indeed teach us many different things. And this poem is one of them. I think theres a little bit of wisdom in this one

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


Charisma
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2 posted 2000-10-06 08:39 PM


in time....love this one...

Charisma

Mike
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3 posted 2000-10-07 12:09 PM


Very nice Vandana.. I liked a lot...
snowpants
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4 posted 2000-10-07 12:11 PM


Great words of encouragement!  Sometimes it's hard to believe that 'in time,' we will find what we're looking for.
Loved it!!

sp  


Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier

Irie
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5 posted 2000-10-07 12:17 PM


I just want to know who's gonna move the clock forward? Hehe  

Ok, seriously though....this is very true and very encouraging.
In time, we'll all get some sort of peace and answers.

Great poem vandana


~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"

Denise
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6 posted 2000-10-07 09:20 AM


Soft and lovely, Vandana! Very nice!

Denise

Jon Mewett
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7 posted 2000-10-07 11:44 AM


very gentle and.........a nice read.

jon

Sven
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8 posted 2000-10-07 01:02 PM


there's only one thing wrong with time vandana. . . it takes too long. . .  

wonderful work as always my friend. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Elizabeth Santos
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9 posted 2000-10-07 01:46 PM


There you go again, exposing your beautiful thoughts.
Very lovely, Vandana

Liz

JamesMichael
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10 posted 2000-10-07 04:11 PM


Luscious warm thoughts about time...yes time can be our friend...even if we find ourselves unhappy now...our day will come when we will know happiness...we will find that which we seek...James
vandana
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11 posted 2000-10-09 06:39 PM


Mike,sven,elizbeth,and everyone,thank you all for reading my poem and loved it.I thank you all.
vandana
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12 posted 2000-10-09 06:42 PM


Mike,sven,elizbeth,and everyone,thank you all for reading my poem and loved it.I thank you all.
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