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Open Poetry #10

Time Escapes Me

Ganymede
New Member

since 2000-09-27

Posts 3

0 posted 2000-09-30 10:32 PM

A crooked heart that flashes brilliance
beckons me to a new favored game,
to which my only thirst be of time
and how to make it precious.
To find those moments when all seems lost
and pass my own fear of as vengeance,
that you found me and covered me
with your graceful warmth, I smile.
What said of this, that we can hold hands
on plateaus of stars that grace Earth,
whos light comes from times so past
that we were merely a glow in God's eye.
And now we comfort those ilks that fall
becoming more inclined to follow,
our hearts find beats that capture
and contort a new rhythm blessed.

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

1 posted 2000-10-01 12:29 PM

very, very deep poem. Great work!!!!

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2000-10-01 01:06 AM

Ganymde,
I'm not sure I understood this but I liked its rythm and style.
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

Marina
Member Elite

since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

3 posted 2000-10-01 07:33 PM

I really the thoughts in this piece. It is deep, intruging and very well penned.

I look forward to reading more of your work.....

Marina

It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

4 posted 2000-10-01 09:21 PM

excellent! and I GOT this poem lol. time sure does fly on by...you have written that exquistely here. welcome to passions and i look forward to reading more from you.
take care.
amy

"The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences"

Martinque
Member

since 2000-05-17

Posts 69

5 posted 2000-10-02 12:24 PM

A wonderful poem. Great talent here.

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