Open Poetry #10 |
Tag Me |
Ganymede New Member
since 2000-09-27
Posts 3 |
Tag me with graceless prose you, fool that you are do not control me nor do you see hope. Tag me a faceless soul you, insecure of your time cannot comprehend how love may come to my heart. Tag me a romantic and I shall prove you correct for this is my mind's eye that captures our love. [This message has been edited by Ganymede (edited 10-01-2000).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Ganymede, I loved this post. It has echoes of familiarity about it, that I can't put my finger on. Good write. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
And I here I thought that "tags" were just for dogs! LOL Your writing is very deep and has a great deal of emotion to it. You have a very talented pen. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Martinque Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 69 |
Another well written piece my friend. I really like the last line. Nothing is better then love. |
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