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Kaleidoscope of Passion
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Kaleidoscope of Passion |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle 
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Wispy White~ Sheer lace at bay’s pane, Silky sheet stretched… On tufted down A feather coverlet sleeps Spooned to cloud-fluff pillow~ Frosting Pink~ Cotton-candied flimsy scrap Of whisper net, diaphanous, On my shoulders, between thighs Lightly drapes~ Warming Gold~ As the rising sun And butter daffodil yellows Scent balmy candles Casting shadows, duet Silhouette upon vanilla wall Glow~ Lively Lavender~ Your rich-flowing Veins quake... Your thought-choking Need to paint me with Your brush~ Raging Red~ Cravings on fire, In eyes deep desirings Explosive reds striking In thunderous showers, Our lightening hour~ Color Indescribable~ Souls collide, Heartstrings slide The spiraling slope, Speckled bright hope~ Tawny Teal~ Calming sea waves Abreast tan dune And dew-meadow green As our embrace takes us Into soothing sleep And kaleidoscope dreams~ ...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. -me, Song of Gesture |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
I am heading for bed in a few minutes and with the images of your poem fresh on my mind I look forward to what I will dream tonight. beautiful poem, wonderfully written. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Thank you, Brian. Sweet dreams!  ...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. -me, Song of Gesture |
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Tears_of_Grace Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 50 |
My favorite would be the whispy white if I had to choose, but since you aren't...I loved the whole poem. |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Tears of Grace....thank you for reading. ...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. -me, Song of Gesture |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I agree, this is lovely and well thought out...a beautiful contribution! Loved the "teal" too, my fave! |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
At the last moment, I changed blue to teal...and now I'm glad I did. Thank you muchly, serenity! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Okay so now I have a favorite of yours and not only that I am putting this one in my library. This is one heck of a poem my friend to say the least. It's beauty is only surpassed by the perfect flow in which you penned it with. Superb!!!!!!! |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
I feel honored...humbly so. Happy your enjoy the colors, Mark. Thank you ...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. -me, Song of Gesture |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is quite lovely indeed ... wonderful creative work here...unique thoughts and delivery .. love the subtle sensuality that is laced in the perfect imagery ... i notice that in much of your work ... (me likes subtle sensuality in poetry) (me likes NOT so subtle sensuality Too)  very impressive work take care jm |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
A wonderful picture you have painted here! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Me, like you, likes subtle sensuality. (That is...when I'm not liking the blatant, in-your-face kind) hehehe) Your reply is so kind, jm...thank you! ...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. -me, Song of Gesture |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
It's fun experimenting with different colors. Thank you EagleOne! ...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. -me, Song of Gesture |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Absolutely beautiful images. How I wish I could write like this Wonderful! Liz |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Elizabeth, I have no doubt that you can and definately DO write beautifully. Your poems attest to that fact! Thank you kindly ...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. -me, Song of Gesture |
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