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I Feel Your Love
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I Feel Your Love |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Deeper than the sea, Higher than that mountain, Far beyond the miles, I feel your love. More softly than the breeze, More swiftly than the wind, More powerfully than the storm, Your love touches me. Lifting my eyes to the sky, Gazing upon the clouds, Absorbing the warm embrace of the sun, It's only your love that envelops me. Soothing my broken heart, Giving me inspiration, Granting me strength, Your love carries me through. Together through it all, Existing as one, Keeping our promise, These two hearts can only beat as one. Through the years, Over the obstacles, In my heart, Our love lives on. (How could this heart Ever be alone, Without the cherishing nature Of yours?) |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Great description of a love that never dies! This warms the heart in your wonderful descriptive wording!  <*\\\>< I know not what the future holds, but I know Who holds the future. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
snowpants, I like this poem There are so many reminders of love that can be found. I posted a poem that has the same type of feel as this one... "I Think Of You".. I think it is in forum 9, incase you wanna look < !signature-->~~Tara aka rp25 [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 09-28-2000).] |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Thanks, WhtDove and rp25 for reading!! sp (and, rp25, I will check out your poem in #9. Thanks!) [This message has been edited by snowpants (edited 09-28-2000).] |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
Aint it great to feel that kind of love. Great poem. Keith Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
It is inspiring to see someone in Love as deep as this, there is beauty in your words, and feeling in your expressions..great poem! |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
a beauty of a verse about the strength of love. and with a great nature theme. (tied together well in the last stanza. good word play!) well penned. "And yesterday went by so quick it seems like it was just a day." |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Keith: yes, it is great, and inspiring! Thanks! Romantic: thanks for the great compliments!! Ethan: I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading!! sp |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
and not only does your love live on but it grows with each passing of time in the open sharing of sentiments and trust such as this. Superb piece of penning from you. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Thanks, Mark! This one, too, is an older one, and, well, circumstances have, unfortunately, changed since. Not to say it doesn't apply anymore, just, not the same situation. Too much info? Thought so! Thanks for reading!!  sp |
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