Open Poetry #10 |
A Tribute To Passion's (my last post for a while) thank you all for being so kind |
Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
I Come To You At Night I come to you at night And tell you all my desires All my thoughts of hopelessness About adventures through passion's fires I give you dreams of hope And of lessons I have learned About all my triumphs And about times I've been burned I'm glad I found a friend I could tell my secrets to Without worries of being judged I know that you'd never do You always make me smile You have that special way About you that comforts me Even on my saddest days So, for this I wish to thank you To all of you I say this I am forever greaful to you all For making Passion's what it is *********************************** I reposted this for all the wonderful friends I have met here at HOME. I will continue to stop by now and again to check on everyone and read the great poetry all you guys post. I feel I owe all of you an explanation so here goes... I guess you could say that I have gotten lost within a world of make believe and I need to find my way back out. I know a lot of you have experienced the magical world of the net (as in meeting new people and falling into the trap of being addicted) Well, the time has come for me to just get away for a while and gather myself back up and enjoy real life again. I have lost so much because of my time on the computer and I have a lot of regrets. The main regret I have is having to be away from my children. I beg of you not to make the mistakes I made. It simply isn't worth the pain it causes. I want to thank you all again for being there when I needed you all most. You will never be forgotten and you will always be loved. I want to send a special thank you to Lone Wolf (Jennifer) You, my friend, know (more than anyone) of my troubles. You have been there for me time after time to listen to me and offer me your virtual shoulder. I thank you from the bottom of my heart. You will be in my thoughts and prayers always. Take care of yourself and continue to find your freedom each day. And remember that tomorrow is a brighter day. Love Ya Sis Until we meet again.... Warmest Regards, Jeffrey |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Jeffery, I am sad to see you go. Earlier today I read and responded to one of your poems and thought "I have to keep an eye out for him..." ~sighs~ but I do understand and wish you the best of luck. I hope you do however at least stop back every now and then to share you wonderful poetry. Take care and be safe. ~hugs~ ~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Jeffrey I understand where you are coming from. I have two wonderful children and I miss them when I'm away. The first thing I do when I get in from work is give them a hug. I try to play with them a little also, but they are small and have so much energy. Being already exhausted, I can only keep up for a short while. I find myself getting on my PC late at night or during a spare moment at work to read a poem or two here in Passions and respond to those that I can. I find myself with little time to post my on poetry, but I enjoy reading others, especially yours. I can't say that I've responded to many of yours, but they were awesome reads. Please drop by from time to time to leave us a line or two from that poetic mind of yours. Take your time to organize and prioritize those things that are important in your life, but do come back. As Nan said in an earlier post, "There is nothing good about Good-bye's." Garfield |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Jeffrey~ We will all miss you here. I'm glad you'll be stopping by from time to time. Hope that everything works out for you in your 'real' life. Good luck and God bless. Elizabeth Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near... [email protected] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
JC, we know you'll visit home now and then...over the holidays...when food's on...coffee's brewed...don't hesitate to say howdy to all... hugs, Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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jinxed Member
since 2000-09-27
Posts 86 |
hugs to you Mr. Jeffrey, all of us here have our problems and reasons for being here and all of us here can probably identify with your reasons for leaving...hope you find the smilea you seek |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Jeffery~Well I am sorry to see you go but I wish you the best in everything you do. I still have you on my ICQ list so dont hesitate to stop and say hi. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a lovely farewell poem Jeffrey ... written with such genuine emotion and love for the comfort and healing the people within these walls bring. Take care in your journeys through life, and please do stop by to visit now and again, you will be missed. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Jeffrey, sorry you're going though I understand the call your family's needing time bestowing while they're still yet small but take a piece of passions deep within your heart it will help in the transition to make a surer start here on the net I'll miss you and your works of art in real life I'll wish you well and understand why you must part. Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
~Jeffery~ It's so sad to see such a talented poet and friend leave, but it is understandable. I wish you the best, take care and please visit us as you promised Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
I've been gone a while and felt I should pop in today and i guess this is why, i got back just in time to say g'bye.....i will miss your posts....I have enjoyed everyone, g'luck... Julie :) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Jeffrey...yes don't live your life with regrets...live it in happiness... as I have mentioned before in another post for one who found themselves spending too much time writing and reading poetry....balance is the key word...something we all must learn...wishing much happiness for you...James |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Jeffery, your poetry will be greatly missed but I know the feeling when the real world comes knocking. take care and hope that you are not kept from us for too long. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Jeff-gator.... you know that i know that you know... *sigh* you too??? the list grows ... while its nice to know Im not alone.. i wish we didnt have to KNOW...ya know. yes...do whats best for you and your kids.. i wish ya nothing but sunshine ... good luck sweets....one day at a time ... later-back to reality-awesome-poet-gator love ya jm |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
The boys will ALWAYS come first...thats just a given...but dont give up the love you believe...its too precious to throw away...time is the key Jeff...just give it time and all things will work out. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Jeffrey, This was an excellent choice for your last post for the time being. I love this poem and think it says it all so well. You have touched me with your special thank you, but I think I did what any friend would do. I sit and type with tears in my eyes as yet another friend bids farewell to Passions. I know your troubles, my friend, and I wish you nothing but the best in your search for peace. You know how to get in touch with me and I will always be here with an ear to listen or shoulder to cry on. You are welcome from my heart for the help and I am glad I could be there for you when you needed me. As I recall, you have been there many times for me also and I want to thank you for that. It is more appreciated than I can ever tell you. Because of that, I will be forever in your debt. Please know that you will be in my thoughts and prayers also. I really do hope that some day you find that in which you go out to seek. I know the price you have paid and it has been too high, but you have learned from this and that will make you a better person in the future. I will take care and hope that you do too. I know now that freedom is something that you should always have, but somehow I have lost mine so I will continue the quest for it. You got me with "remember tomorrow will be a brighter day" . . . how could I forget? I never will thanks to you. Just to prove that look below . . . a new day is already dawning my friend. Love Ya Bro, Jennifer Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Jeffery, Will look forward to your visits and perhaps a few posts (?) We'll miss you greatly Take care and be careful out there in the world of reality Liz |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Jeff~ such a beautiful poem you have here. you are one of my favorites here at passions. such a wonderful group of loving people come here to share some amazing poetry...i just wanted you to know that i love reading your work and through it have come to know you in a way. you have an awesome ability...never leave it for too long k. now i don't do byes so i'll just say see ya later. take care. ~amy~ p.s. thanks so much for all your wonderful replies to my work. "The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences" |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Just came back to say thank you for all the wonderful words youguys have written here. I miss you and love you all. Take care Until we meet again... Jeffrey |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
Jeff, i remember the New Horizon's challenge way back, long ago. that was the first challenge i've responded to, and it really helped at the time. it got my creativity out of a slump. but now you're off on a new horizon of your own. i wish you best of luck, and take heart in knowing that you are not forgotten. Everyone's got their demons. We all got somethin' to atone for. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
just want to say that i thought this was a lovely poem and my sincere wishes--all the best in whatever you do |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Jeffrey you will be sadly missed but at least we all know you won't be gone forever. Your poem a lovely goodbye Please stop by every now and again and say Hi HUGS Love Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
this is very beautiful jeffery...i'm glad i didnt miss out on reading it take care in the real world..its a wild one do visit passions whenever you can... hugs to you, dg theres no such thing as a failure who keeps trying--coasting to the bottom is the only disgrace. -j popper |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Jeffery...I know where you are coming from on this one, that is one of the several reasons my presence on passions has been so limited. It is easy to sit down here for a few minutes to read a poem or two and find yourself several hours and a hundred poems later still in the same spot. Know that your presence will be sadly missed, but take it from my example that you can be on here once in a while and let people know you are still alive and kicking. Please drop me an e-mail from time to time as I do care about you best wishes and big hugs |
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