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RocketRide Junior Member
since 2000-10-06
Posts 13USA |
….Deep in my heart I hope we never part You know this is true I love you “Disjointed, did you say? Hmm…. Trite? I hardly think so Wait! Let me try again” ….Far down in the trenches of the bottom of my broken heart I am in hopes that we will never part You must know how I feel, know that it’s true I love you “Not beat them over the head? But I didn’t beat anyone over the head Britney Spears knock-off? Now, I hardly think that was necessary No, please! I can do better, I promise!” She walks in beauty…. “Plagiarism-- What are you talking about? Byron? Never heard of him…. Don’t walk away! One more time…please…” When I see you, I have to remind my knees that they have function Purpose That at one time they could look at the opposite sex And still be Just fine…. “Better? Not ‘excellent’? And you call yourself a teacher….” 10.5.00 RocketRide |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Rocket Ride~ I am a teacher, and with this, I'd give you an A+ !  By the way, WELCOME! I hope you'll stay and play a while. -SEA |
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English Rose Member
since 2000-08-20
Posts 211Berkshire, England |
No teachings from me!....I just write it how I feel it and be damned!!! |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Hey welcome to Passions!!! This was too fun. Loved it. Juls |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Rocket ride Welcome enjoyed reading it, and it make me smile...yeah you can do better..... a promise...so I will looking forward to see more.. Charisma |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! I liked this very much and look forward to reading more from you...check your email!  |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
That was my teacher at school, never could please her. Anyway welcome I can see your off to a good start Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Rocket...what an aweome entrance you have made...cant wait to read more...this was just too much fun...welcome to our world |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
... and I'm a teacher - I say it's good... Welcome to Passions, btw..  |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Welcome to Passions! This is so honest and open, I loved it! Kathleen |
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