Open Poetry #10 |
Life Is What It Is |
John Yaws Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 860Texas |
I tried to live a fantasy. My mind roved wild and free. I found those lies were quick to bind, Like prison bars you see? The world I love has long since flown… Those days are gone forever… To pursue dreams one can’t attain- I fear is not so clever. When youth is gone, accept it… And responsibility. It’s only after duty’s done, A man is really free. Be yourself, and stand up tall- Accept reality- For life is what it is, my friend. Not what it ought to be. |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
very good and very true keep up the good work ~Angie Don't fear failure so much that you refuse to try new things. The saddest summary of a life contains three descriptions: could have, might have, and should have. --Louis Boone |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Hey GS! Excellent verse as always! Be yourself, and stand up tall- Accept reality- For life is what it is, my friend. Not what it ought to be. I agree with this in part. Life is what it is, but it can be what we want it to be as well! When we set goals too high they are hard to attain, so maybe lower them a bit. Life can be what we make it! I so love your verse GS! <*\\\>< I know not what the future holds, but I know Who holds the future. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Excellent message and poem, John. Life is seldom what we think it ought to be. It truly is what it is. Well done! Denise |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Excellent work GS, But life ought to include more that joy through duty. "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Gunslinger- WOW! I really like this alot. Much truth in this...very good message. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
great message..i love this something i ought to read more often! lol hugs, dg my soul is painted like the wings of butterflies...fairytales of yesterday will grow but never die...i can fly--my friends -Queen |
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