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Sunshine
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0 posted 2000-09-29 12:16 PM


Love Will Lie


Hopes and dreams shall transpire
e’en when the heavens above are dry
e’en when the ground is hard and cracking
e’en when all roots shrivel and die

for in them
love will lie


shall I be stalwart, knowing there are ends
to periods and passages of time
sending prayers heavenward and more
and listen to the seasons’ flow and rhyme

for in these
love will lie


you know I shall, God, you know I shall
you are inspiration for the hopes and dreams
you are the guiding hand in the dark and
answers will come in sunshine and moonbeam

for in You
love will lie





Karilea
When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


© Copyright 2000 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Mark Bohannan
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1 posted 2000-09-29 12:25 PM


Hold onto your dreams and your hopes and you will someday realize them all.  Patience can be the hardest thing in life sometime but in the end it all pays off.  
Sunnyone
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2 posted 2000-09-29 12:28 PM


You, lil' sis, never cease to put a smile on my face and a song in my heart!! This is really something else, and has such a great message.  Thank you for this one!!


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!



Marsha
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3 posted 2000-09-29 12:47 PM


Karilea this is a wonderful poem, it's just fabulous. I love it,

'love will lie'

My how I love this poem,
Take care
                     Marsha
                    

Sven
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4 posted 2000-09-29 12:54 PM


love will always lie in the hearts of those who welcome it. . .

just wonderful my friend. . .  

-----------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Sunshine
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5 posted 2000-09-29 05:30 PM


Mark, time, years, gray hair, yes I know, patience is a virtue, and I'm going out to purchase some now...

Sunny1, I LOVE the graphic...how good of you to share it here...

Marsha...you're too kind...but since I don't take cash, I'll take this compliment...thank you...

Sven, yes, it will...thank you...

Karilea
When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


vlraynes
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6 posted 2000-10-23 06:05 PM



Sunshine-
   I love this.  
   So beautifully written.  

   -vicky



  


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



Sunshine
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7 posted 2000-10-23 08:28 PM


Vicky, I am seeing your signature posts more and more...thank you for gracing mine...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ



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8 posted 2000-10-23 08:36 PM


I feel like I don't belong in this forum.  You people are way too good.  Love's own contradictions is what makes it great.

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


doreen peri
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9 posted 2000-10-23 09:05 PM


well, it's lied to me repeatedly, but i still like your poem... lol  
Marge Tindal
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10 posted 2000-10-23 09:06 PM


Karilea~

'shall I be stalwart, knowing there are ends
to periods and passages of time'


Sometimes it doesn't seem so easy to be stalwart, does it ?
And endings always seem to come before the passage should be over.

This one touched me sadly ... but that's okay,
your tenderness has a habit of doing that to me sometimes.

Loving you and your beautiful thoughts, Karilea.
~*Marge*~





~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sunshine
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11 posted 2000-10-24 08:28 AM


acire, what a lovely compliment, being named on the "you people"...it puts me in good company.  Keep reading and enjoying...you'll find yourself at home, soon enough...

doreen, always a thanks for the 'I still'...

Marge, you are right, sometimes it's not...thank you for reading...



Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ



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