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The Breeze |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
It's the breeze I need to hear When the world Has turned on me. Can't you see-- You're the only one Who can wear that number The way you do. I'll never be dissuaded; No one can tell me otherwise. This quiet night Belongs to reverie; Only to those fantasies Of you and me, Alone on this cloud I've discovered. Here I can lose myself In this song, Which has become My steadfast. And, It's only here That I find strength To live. As the rivers flow, Once again, I find a way to survive the day Until we meet again. |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
"As the rivers flow" Could it be the blood from Cupid's arrow that has started this flow. AHHHHH, a bleeding heart.  Awesome poem. I like your expressions in this one Snowpants. Let "The Breeze" blow. Garfield |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Another wonderful post from you snowpants. You are definately on a roll here. Great poetry! |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Garfield: thank you, and I'm glad you liked it!  TA: it's an honor to know that my posts are being enjoyed by my fellow poets!! Thanks so much for reading!! sp  |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Snowpants- this is very beautifully written. i like it alot. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Well, thank you, Vicky! I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading. sp Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Love the way your mind is swept away on the breezes of sentiment. Lovely in all respects. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Well, thanks, Mark! Glad you liked it. Thanks for stopping by!! sp Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
You roped the wind in this SP...fantastic weave of love and hope at its finest...great work~ |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
snowpants, You have done it again. bringing to my heart feelings so familiar. Keep that splendid write going. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
I always make a note of reading your new posts, snowpants. And I am never disappointed. Nicely done! ~ Beth I hate quotations. Tell me what you know. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
butterflies: well, thank you for your kind comments! I'm glad you stopped by! Daniel: hello! thanks for reading, and I'm glad you liked it!! Beth: thanks, my friend! I am honored to know you like my poetry! glad you enjoyed!!  sp Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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