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A Poem
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A Poem |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A Poem Everything speaks to me High tension fingers Whispering breath Feelings that yearn Like molten lead. Words that echo Whirling round Circling head, heart And rebound. Aches quakes Nauseate No aphrodisiac. Ecstasy has flown I am alone. Please come back. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
5, 4, 3, 2, 1...a countdown to a most enticing request... yes... most enticing... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Oh WoW ST! Wording, feeling, tone, awesome. *Peace. |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
Incredible poetry! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Karilea, YES-------*L* SpitFire, Thank you for the WOW Snow, Wonderful comment, where did you find it? |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Seymour~ this is a great poem, I really liked the ending.  -SEA |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I confess, Sy, the title drew me in....quite a plea from thee  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Great job, Seymour! (I'm sighing those last few lines tonight. *S*) |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sy~ Fantastic piece of poetry!!!! Everything speaks to me High tension fingers Whispering breath Feelings that yearn Like molten lead. Words that echo Whirling round Circling head, heart And rebound. Aches quakes Nauseate No aphrodisiac. Ecstasy has flown I am alone. Please come back. take care Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is fantastic, Sy! I love this style! Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sea, Thank you so much. Balladeer, I knew the title would catch you. Thanks Suthern, Thanks for the great job. Tracie, Thanks I'll try to take care. Denise, Thank you sweet. *L* |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Well! A very worth write, well done and very enticing thoughts. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Exceptional ! loved it~S~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy--very well done...heart wrenching ending. [This message has been edited by Martie (edited 10-21-2000).] |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Simply beautiful! I can see this with two different meanings. I'm glad I found it!  |
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