Open Poetry #10 |
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cathybohannan Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 140Paintsville,KY |
When you speak you should know, You are not the only one in the show. What you say can hurt, If you don't stop and think first. Try being in their shoes, When you say the words you chose. Try not to put others down, Cause things could be the other way around. We were sent by God above, Showing his everlasting love. We need to love our neighbor, Just like Jesus, our Lord and Savior. So next time you have something to say, Be sure it comes out the right way. We all live together, So we need to be friends with each other. This poems is written to the residents of the place where I live. Cathy Marie Bohannan |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Amen, Cathy. I'm glad you came in here and posted this. It brought me a little bit of peace. Thank you. Elizabeth Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near... [email protected] |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Hi Cathy, I think this is beautiful and so very true....I wish more people felt like this. Wonderful poem. -SEA |
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cathybohannan Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 140Paintsville,KY |
Thanks Elizabeth and Sea, I am glad you like this poem. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Cathy this is wonderful, how often someones words can hurt and cause upset. So well stated and so well written, well done. I like this I really do, (not that I always put my brain into gear before putting my mouth in motion,) but I will try. Take care, and welcome to the haven Marsha |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Cathy- such truth here...so many times people speak without thinking of the feelings of others. thank you so much for this reminder to all of us of just how much words can hurt. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cathy~ We should all chew our words a little longer. If they taste bitter - they probably are. If they taste sweet - spread 'em around ! Such thoughtfulness in your verse. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Wise words of truth, my friend, and well put. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
almost missed this one, glad that I found it before it fade away. wise and true words Cathy. thread add to my library. Charisma |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Cathy, wisdom from babes, well written and good advice. Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
That is so true dear..but no matter how nice you are there will always be someone who doesnt like you or wants to put you down.. for their own selfish reasons..just be yourself, Keep writing Cathy... nicely done ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Wonderful words of wisdom my sweet little sister. Excellent penning to bring it to light. I love you ya know and have fun in Reno and good luck [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 10-24-2000).] |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Sometimes I think we all need reminders like this one. Well said, Cathy. Dee |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful sentiments Cathy! This is something I take so strongly to heart ... beautiful message, thanks so much for this lovely reminder! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Beautiful work from a beautiful heart Cathy...it's glowing in this piece~ |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Words said and written all have meanings. Interpretation is a reflection of self. I agree with you wholeheartedly, many are out to hurt others deliberately with words. Thank you for having the courage to spell it out. Cheers Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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