Open Poetry #10 |
Sharing |
inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
I share my computer with husband and son Laughter rings through the house as they have fun Over and over they read each other’s poetry Valid criticism is received without any animosity Each day my son visits and gets on line to read the words That’s here on Passionate Forum, where no poem is seen as absurd Here I’ve watched them grow closer day by day Each has gained insight into the others way My only problem now is, I don’t get enough time on line |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ditto...well done! Now, acrostic on! Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Sunshine, It is finally my turn, thanks for reading. |
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jlocke Member
since 2000-09-10
Posts 169CC,TX |
I like it...Mom. btw get another computer. Love is the law, love under will. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
LOL Excellent. . .I know the feeling. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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