Open Poetry #10 |
Turn On The Music ... repost for Sunshine's music challenge |
Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
hey...I gotta weekend pass out of rehab LOL... repost from open 8 see Sunshines request in challenge forum for a better idea of what the challenge is. ======================== **dedicated to music... dedicated to Jackson Browne and Van Morrison... whose music was my first true poetic inspiration. They are poets first ... ~Turn On The Music~ Turn on the music ... let it carry me away, God, I love the way it feels ... please let the music play. Turn it up LOUD ... I want to feel the songs run thru my spine, I want to feel every note ... make each word become mine. Turn it up louder ... I want to feel the base surge right thru me, I want to taste the rhythm ... touch the sweet harmony. Sitting in front of the speakers ... feel those vibrations run up thru my chest, crank it up louder at the guitar solo ... that's the part I like best. Spare me all the lectures ... I've heard them all thru the years, I'm not turning it down ... those words indeed -- fall on deaf ears. Music is my religion, like poetry ... my only other saving grace, let the melody wash over me ... all my cares leave without a trace. So sing my heart once again Jackson ... your songs take me home, for so many years now ... for your words ... I'm never alone. Serenade me Van ... take me with you in to those mystical skies, with in your magical lyric ... all my hopes and dreams lie. Sing to me your verses ... your poetry put to song, sing to me your secrets ... your words have helped to keep me strong. My one true constant ... my quiet comfort on those long, lonely, nights, your words held my heart ... and for a while, made the world seem right. So turn on the music ... then turn it up loud so I can hear every last word, no matter how many times I've played it before, when my "brown eyed poets" sing to me ... it's still the most beautiful song I've ever heard. Janet Marie ************** ~LATE FOR THE SKY~ Jackson Browne Now the words had all been spoken And somehow the feeling still wasn't right And still we continued on through the night Tracing our steps from the beginning Until they vanished into the air Trying to understand How our lives has lead us there Looking hard into your eyes There was nobody I'd ever known Such an empty surprise To feel so alone Now for me some words come easy But I know that they don't mean that much Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch You never knew what I loved in you I don't know what you loved in me Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be Awake again I can't pretend And I know I'm alone And close to the end Of the feeling we've known How long have I been sleeping How long have I been drifting alone through the night How long have I've dreaming I could make it right If I closed my eyes and tried with all my might To be the one you need Awake again I can't pretend And I know I'm alone And close to the end Of the feeling we've known How long I've been sleeping How long have I been drifting alone through the night How long have I been running for that morning flight Through the whispered promises and the changing light In the bed where we both lie Late for the sky ******************** ~These Are The Days~ Van Morrison These are the days of the endless summer These are the days, the time is now There is no past, there's only future There's only here, there's only now Oh your smiling face, your gracious presence The fires of spring are kindling bright Oh the radiant heart and the song of glory Crying freedom in the night These are the days by the sparkling river His timely grace and our treasured find This is the love of the one magician Turned the water into wine These are days of the endless dancing and the Long walks on the summer night These are the days of the true romancing When I'm holding you oh, so tight These are the days by the sparkling river His timely grace and our treasured find This is the love of the one great magician Turned water into wine These are the days now that we must savour And we must enjoy as we can These are the days that will last forever You've got to hold them in your heart. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
{{{hands clapping}}} Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
My sweet friend, do you KNOW how nice it is to see "JANET MARIE" in that column when I looked down the line of poems? I am glad to have given you a weekend pass as you have been "somewhat" good in your rehab.LOL. Your words as always "ROCK" and now I am "ROLLING" in joy at seeing you with us again. And folks, she ain't lieing about the music either....trust me. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
dancing in my drause...LOL and a *wink* atchya, lovie! (burp!) But you KNEW I would love this! e ya later....and "Wish You Were Here"---Pink Floyd |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, This quite a canvas you painted. And to me it hangs on a gyroscope. Enjoyed. Sy |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Hello There! So nice to see you HERE...I am with Sunshine......{{{clapping}}}......ok, I am starting the wave........lol...... Take Care.... And Thank you , it's easy to hold onto dreams when he is holding just as tight. Jenn E |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Jan I am grooving to this right... wonderful poem, lifted my spirits right up. I have to find some up lifting music the closest I get to up lifting is Manic Street Preachers. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I loved this the first time round Janet, still do! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
I recall this one, JM, really got the groove with this poem! Corinne |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Janet--I can relate so well to this music feeling...wonderfully written...just the way the music takes you, and makes you... swaying with you Janet girl...turn the volumn up!! |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Hey, JM, I'm just one of the Beach Boys down here getting those Good Vibrations from your poetry. You go, girl!!! Let those woofers and tweeters cringe at the mention of your name!!! I just love it when you POP IN like this!!! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
TURN IT ON excellent work, Janet, how many times ever I read this, I will always say these words... BRILLIANT!!! regards, sudhir |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Janet~ I recall this well! And I loved it just as much the second read as I did the first time. Excellent work as always...but I expect no less from you Love ya, ~Amy~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
library *click* |
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