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ritual of moon--Paradelle
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ritual of moon--Paradelle |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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crescent moon in darkened sky crescent moon in darkened sky tell us of his coming tell us of his coming crescent moon tell us of his coming in darkened sky October winds blow cold and chill October winds blow cold and chill when days grow shorter when days grow shorter shorter October days grow when cold winds chill and blow we thank thee ritual moon we thank thee ritual moon for bringing him to us for bringing him to us thank we him moon ritual for bringing thee to us tell us ritual of moon crescent moon cold to us we thank thee darkened sky for bringing in his coming chill him and blow winds when October days grow shorter ------------------------------------------------------------------- < !signature--> That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 10-31-2000).] |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sven~ Bravo!! Love this one!!  -SEA |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Now...YOU knew I'd like this one!!! Fantastic job with this Sven...the witching hour draws near, yes? LOL..and happy Samhein. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Sven ~~~ < !signature-->A truly great offering on this the night of bewitching hour! Blessed Be, my friend......  Follow your dream! [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 10-31-2000).] |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Great Job Sven! I like it! i like It! Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Yes, yes, I liked this very much. "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sven, Congratulations on the brilliant Octberfest Paradelle. Does your head hurt? Some Tylenol perhaps or maybe a beer festival? loved it Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sven, Well done paradelle. I knew you'd come up with a good one! I love the October theme. Very nice. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
SEA, thank you serenity, I was hoping that you would like it. . . and yes, the hour does draw near, and happy Samhein to you also my friend. . . Sunny1, thank you for your offering to me my friend. . .blessed be. . . Ron, thanks, but do you like it? Kathleen, thank you my friend. . . Kethry, thank you very much. . . beer please, and lots of it!!!  LW, you know me, no time like the last minute. . . thank you. . . Can I just say that this was indeed quite difficult to do oh great teacher Nan??  But you know the funny thing? I have this strange desire to want to do another one!! LOL--------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ Very nicely done, indeed ! Oh ... like suffering, huh ? Go for it ! I think it must be the bewitched hour ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Passions Voice Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291Michigan |
Wow. This is good. I don't know that if I could do something like this. The way that you used the moon is wonderful. Happy Samhein to you also my friend. passion is life. . . ~Diana |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
WOW!!!! Wonderful paradelle Sven Excellent work Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Digging out from under a paradelluge... This one's good, Sven - Nicely, nicely crafted.. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Great job, Sven! I have a taste for this format myself, it's great to see what you came up with. I have a few things to learn yet, and I think I learned one or two from reading this. Cheers. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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