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Her Ever Constant Star
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Her Ever Constant Star |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Her Ever Constant Star I've seen those tears so many times With so much love So many times for you… A mind that holds the very thoughts With so much heart The very thoughts of you… Her soul has shown the deepest care With so much truth The deepest care for you… The ache she wears for all to see With so much strength And for all to see of you… An Angel is her ever-constant star With so much Love DeVante' her ever constant star is you. James Parker Haley (c) Nov 8, 2000 ** For my friend Janet and her ever ** constant star…. DeVante' ** you show so much love in your words. Parker...  [This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 11-09-2000).] |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Oh my goodness Parker...she is going to love this...and cry as hard as I am right now! This is so beautiful I just can't even fully describe it...you are an angel sweet Parker and this is amazing~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great tribute to a real sweetheart Parker you could'nt have made a better choice and you wrote it so well....ethome |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
see what happens when you make me cry! [This message has been edited by Butterflies_dont_cry (edited 11-08-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Oh P-man ... you have touched my heart tonite and hung my moon .. you have no idea... thank you so very very much for this gift thank you for seeing him in me ...and helping me celebrate him. you know that there is no gift I treasure more than that of poetry.. and friendship ...and you have shared both with me.. thank you seems too little to say, and really doesnt do this or you justice. your so special my sweet friend. love you for this.... I owe ya a pedestal built by angels for this one  Thank you Parker ... always |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
James, This is a tremendous gesture of kindess and love to our dear Janet Marie. I know how much she will truly apprecaite this wonderful poem for her amazing muse. He is indeed an incredible soul, that through JM we have all come to know and admire. This poem is most definetly a perfect example of the wonderful friend you really are. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Parker, it is so welcome to see someone who will look beyond the veil, into the pale, and see the heart... this was lovely... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Parker- this is so beautiful. you are such a sweetheart for writing this for Janet Marie and her DeVante'. wonderful, my friend. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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poetic_imperfection Junior Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 45 |
What a wonderful poem to read tonight. Who ever these poeple are are truelly blessed. Thanks for the wonderful read! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You are something else, Parker. This is fantastic...I don't have the words to describe---and I'm so glad you did. HUGS to all... |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
this is beautiful I loved every word Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Parker--Janet is a special lady and her poetry lights up her heart and soul on the page...thank you for this wonderful poem...you are special too. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
parker.this is such a sweet tribute..makes me sorry i dont know the story behind it..but whatever it is..this devante must be some very special someone to janet marie what a wonderful friend you are for picking out her beauty from the pages, holding it close to your heart, and spilling it here in such wonderful lines for janet marie hugs,dg "i could hide out under there...i just made you say 'underwear'...i could leave but i'll just stay--all my stuff's here anyway..." |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Butterflies, thank you. ethome, thanks pal. Butterflies, your very sweet when you cry. Janet, your words of DeVante' constantly echo on these pages. His soul seems to be a part of passions too. He speaks to us all through your words. I for one think we would be less without his visits through you. Hugs my friend, for you and him. Marina, thank you. Sunshine, thank you. Vicky, thank you. poetic_imperfection, thank you and welcome. serenity, thank you. A Whisper's Caress, thank you and welcome. Martie, thank you. dg, thank you sweets. Parker |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Parker~ this is amazing and so sweet......I love the viewpoint you took. *SIGH* such sweetness  -SEA |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
SEA, thank you sweet lady. Parker |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Parker, my man......holding Jan's friendship as dear as I do and knowing the depth of the love that you have written for...well, I have no shame in telling you that tears well up in my eyes on this one. You have penned a beauty and I already know her response to this as I have heard it from her personally. Your works have always made me aware of the masterful pen you write with but this one not only falls in that catagory but it is written with the love of friendship that you have in your heart and you have shown that in PERFECTION. I applaud you and I once again bow to you. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Mark, thank you good poet. Just my humble attempt to show what I see, in her words and in her heart. Parker |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
a wonderful tribute for Janet....you have done a good job, really love it. beautiful and sweet. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
No star shines as bright as your heart, in this exceptional gesture... A second read seemed only appropriate. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
thank you again for this P-man..very much and thank you to all who replied to this lovely tribute with such wonderful accepting words of my poetry for him... trust me every word is heartfelt.. as is every line in this beautiful poem. love to all jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This a a very well deserved tribute to the girl who keeps us smiling, whose heart has room for everyone, and who expresses that love so charmingly every day. Her responses are as vibrant as the poetry she comments on, and she is an inspiration to us all. This is a very beautiful tribute I enjoyed reading it Liz |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
James~ Comes straight from the heart this beautiful piece of poetry...well penned lovely written words for the beautiful hearted Janny...well done ~HUGS~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Masked Intruder
Moderator
Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
Hi there. My name is Philip Zemler. And I just wanted to say that....well....you are my new idol. Can I have your autograph? |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Charisma, thank you sweet poet. Marina, thank you. Janet, it was a pleasure to write about you. Liz, she is very special to us thank you. Tracie, thank you. Philip, well not sure how to take you comment, but thanks for reading. Parker [This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 11-10-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Back into my library this special gift goes.. thank you again P-man...more than you know.. (actually..I know you do know) ... thats why you wrote this beauitful poem.  Pedestals baby...Im building ya a pedestal |
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