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The White Glove [repost, because....] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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The White Glove Cannot you see it? That perfect, stark white glove for opera, she is pulling it on just now, slowly, with intent, onto her left hand. Her right hand’s fingers caress lightly her left wrist, slightly tugging, gently easing the glove up her silken arm, then smoothing the gossamer-like cotton of the glove, with her right hand, oblivious, ‘tho it is gloveless. And the art of her is just like a portrait unfinished Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I love those single captured moments and how they paint an indelible picture on your mind....very good Sunshine!! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
i like this one alot..i can see her image before me..a lovely portrait indeed..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, this is as always exquisite, such amazing writing from you. You are far too good at this you really are. So psst missus, can I offer you some barely used superbs, and a couple of bravos.  Love this Kari as you knew I would.Take care Majestic Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
This is VERY intruiging! I really like it! May I tell you something personal? For a reason unknown to either my husband or me, we have both been cut off at the same time, from posting any new poetry at Passions. But for some reason, we are allowed to continue contributing comments. So I must say, if we are cast out, good-bye, my friend! We care about you. |
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Ron
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-05-19
Posts 8669Michigan, US |
Rosemary, the software doesn't have the capability to allow replies while disallowing new topics. Nor do we "cast out" Members without explaination. If you are experiencing problems posting, I assure you they have absolutely nothing to do with us. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Rosemary - Try posting your new topic in Open #11. This forum is closed to new posts for everyone. BTW, I like your poem, Sunshine...  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thanks everyone...this is one of my favored pieces... for me it is most visual... thanks again. Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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