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Last Days of May
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Last Days of May |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
The last days of May Drift by in summer sunlight In a cloudburst that drums on the roof The last days of May Splash across diamond spangled skies Slip by in feather soft foggy mornings The last days of May Looking without knowing Into the eyes of her family The last days of May Lost in the past Gone between one breath and the next The last days of May I miss you Grandma |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
beautiful tribute Paula... lovely imagery ... somethings cant be replaced by the passing of time... well done writing take care jm |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thats a sad poem miss finn yuh but uplifting in the memory part i likes it yuh my lil girl turns a year older every last days o' may |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Paula that's very tender loving composition and I love the comparisons ...just humbly beautiful..this poem...keep up the good work!! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Paula, this is beautiful a loving tribute to a very much loved grandma. I love this one, such a clear picture, and such wonderful writing. You are so talented Paula, I really love this one. Take care Mushy Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Paula- this is so beautiful.  such a wonderful tribute to your grandma...your love for her really shines through in this piece. hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Warm and tender words shared for your Grandma..James |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Splash across diamond sparkled skies....that line right there stuck out like a sore thumb cause it's so beautiful....this piece is very sad and I'm sorry to hear that you've lost your grandma...shed a teardrop for me! Nathan |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
JM...thank you Walt...thank you kind sir... ethome...you always make me feel so good about my writing...thank you sweet friend Marsha...Girl...you are so sweet to say these things thanks vlraynes...Thanks...I really miss her James...thanks friend...she was such a special lady Nathan...thank you for the tear...I miss her everyday |
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