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A senryu and a haiku
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A senryu and a haiku |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Now that I know the difference I offer both Distant Miles Across distant miles Two hearts two minds lives entwined Can we ever be Winter Whispers Winter winds whisper Snow in ever growing drifts Cherry blossoms bloom |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
and both are very nice!!!  liked the way you gave the reader an open-ended ending in your senryu |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very nice I commend you for using the style and doing something with it...good work!! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Paula- these are both wonderfully done. i really enjoyed reading them. i must warn you though...this style can become very addicting...lol. hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Certainly addicting to the reader too Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
kaile...thank you...this is new to me and I am not real sure if Im doing it right...but its fun ethome...thank you my friend...its fun trying new things vlraynes...well its not the style I usually write in but its ben fun Pepper...thank you...what a great compliment |
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