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lucky
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since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601
Idaho

0 posted 2000-11-16 02:53 AM


Blessed Be The Name Of The Lord

oh my sweet lady my heart bleeds
with tears & all anyone can offer me
is a story of a friend from up on
high I’m a prisoner of
love & also
I’m
so
unworthy
to be loved filled
with your doubts & tears
how could God ever find me
I’m so lost to emotions that
I can’t even find me


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Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am.
To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight.
-Marge Tindal




[This message has been edited by lucky (edited 11-16-2000).]

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Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 997
northern mountains, Idaho
1 posted 2000-11-16 03:13 AM


Declicate - poignant - you are there, my darling, you are there.  All my anguish, you have followed - all my sorrow, your tomorowed...

tears ...




The spiritual wind that holds survivors aloft, plants the seeds from which bloom new hope ... R.J.G.



Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
2 posted 2000-11-16 04:46 PM


"I am so lost to emotion I can't even find me" ...I know how that feels...I love you guys!
vlraynes
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
3 posted 2000-11-16 10:52 PM



lucky-
  
       'how could God ever find me
       I’m so lost to emotions that
           I can’t even find me'

   oh my...i know this feeling all too well.
   rest assured, God knows EXACTLY where
   you are...even when YOU don't.  
   wonderfully penned.  

   -vicky



      
    


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
4 posted 2000-11-16 11:31 PM


how amazing that God can find us..when we cannot find ourself..   He must be looking from a different angle  

take care, and know that you are never truly lost  

hugs,dg


"so lift your heart with mine...the depth to which it grieves is the height to which it can celebrate!" -Lisa Hussey

lucky
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since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601
Idaho
5 posted 2000-11-17 04:33 AM


thank you all. I don't know if this reply will come through, but you have all been great.
lucky
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since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601
Idaho
6 posted 2000-11-17 05:04 AM


It appears I'm unable to post here any more so I leave you with my last.

Good Bi

What a day..! [^@#$%*+].
I feel like Sheol is drugged me into an early
grave.  Somehow after I had read a few lines from
a night before I found it, should I say, fascinating
because last night I was all ready for today
(spiritually alert, wide awake)

ready to take on the
place. I remember
too I was enthusiastic
for it to greet me. Now that
it’s here and I’ve met you I’m not
so sure... However I am trying to be optimistic,

looking for the favorable. I guess that’s easy for people as
copious as the big Ds. advocates but with my little freedom
of verse, I can only confess that I’m a day closer to rest.

It’s getting easier to express such gnawing
loneliness with phrase, but I
suppose it’s better I shan't
for this moment. It’s actually been
hard for me to keep up an optimism for such
futures & what was in it. I originally thought, and still

do, that this is a spiritual thing. However, even with my
many years of Biblical experience, I’ve gotten
slushy and in no way ready for such
an incident. In fact I don’t
believe I thought this
kind of rivalry
could’ve happened

and I regret you ever
experienced it. Under other
circumstances I could have
maybe thought it could
be likened unto
such. But as
it is an
adversary
has again been
thoroughly articulate.

if you found the time I thank
you and if not all the same

good bi





[This message has been edited by lucky (edited 11-17-2000).]

Rosemary J. Gwaltney
Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997
northern mountains, Idaho
7 posted 2000-11-17 05:34 AM


My darling heart!  I don't know why they have cut you off from posting.  I am so hurt, I can't explain.  I love you from the depths of my heart.  I think we had a lot to offer Passions.


JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
8 posted 2000-11-17 07:28 AM


Rosemary I suggest you and your husband try posting on OP #11.  Take it easy...answers will come soon enough...James
dragonpoe
Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida
9 posted 2000-11-17 08:26 AM


Enjoyed the read very much, both of them.
Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
10 posted 2000-11-17 01:53 PM


Lucky--I think Jamie is right...no one can post in open 10 any more...I'm sure you will be able to post in open 11...Hugs!
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