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Loves Destiny |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
As I lay sleeping, I dreamt I asked God above, Why did he send you to me, only to lose you in love? He responded to me to go forth and live the love you continue to give. Only in doing this will you continue to live. I listened well to what had been told to me. "You cannot understand you full destiny". My child don't you see, it's been set in stone, "He who has been in love and felt love is never alone". |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Gemini~ this is WONDERFUL!!  -SEA |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Thank you SEA, yours are pretty wonderful too! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I have given up on Destiny. . . I'd rather leave it to Fate. . . Excellent poem. . . --------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Sven-Thanks for visiting and responding. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Gemini-- first and foremost this is just very beautiful! secondly it touched deep within my soul. this is how i feel about losing my mom. i thank you for posting this wonderful piece. you have an amazing talent. take care. ~amy~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Yes. And God said "above all, love." |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
"He who has been in love and felt love is never alone". ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ love that line....thanks for sharing your beautiful poem, Charisma |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Gem, This is so very well written. I really enjoyed it so much. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Very beautiful work...it was a pleasure to read this! You cannot dance in the sun until you have cried in the rain~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
That's a real pretty one Gemini it's a real enjoyable read...ethome...good work!! |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Aimster-I am honoured and touched by your message, thank you so much for stopping by. Peace and Hugs. Interloper-Thank you, I appreciate. Charisma-Glad to have shared, Thank you. Daniel JD-Thank you, you're very sweet. Butterflies-Glad to be of pleasure, appreciate that you read. ethome-Thanks for visting and for your sweet comment. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I listened well to what had been told to me. "You cannot understand you full destiny". My child don't you see, it's been set in stone, "He who has been in love and felt love is never alone". ========== oh I love this poems wisdom and grace... and your rhyme is perfect .. very well done Gem... this is a jewel...one for my treasure chest as Wil calls it. take care jm "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" Lao Tze Tao ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
jm-You're very sweet, thank you for your kind response. I have alot of fav's which belong to you also. |
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