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My Time......my attempt at a Haiku.....
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My Time......my attempt at a Haiku..... |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
All I want to do Is spend all my time with you That’s not asking very much |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
NO, it's not. Good effort  |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
alan, great haiku. honest and a beautiful expression of your feelings. great job. take care. ~amy~  |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Great thoughts...and no that's not to much when it's right~ You cannot dance under the rainbow until you have cried in the rain~ |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Thank you for your kind comments. |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Allan, Great effort. I liked it. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Not a lot to ask at all.... Don't close your eyes to the possibilities |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
He does not ask much for you, the moon he offers his heart lies in your soft palm. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
sweet poem of devotion |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You're right that's not asking much..good stuff!...hope she read this. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Alan~ I liked this VERY much! -SEA |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Thank you Daniel....for me this did take some effort.... Thank you Paula.....for some it could be too much to even hope for Thank you Corrine Kaile......thanks.....it is a wish of mine ethome......thank you.....yes ....she did read it Thank you .....SEA..... |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Allan~ Wonderful effort Wonderful thoughts Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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