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Sirocco Sighs..................
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Sirocco Sighs.................. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Sirocco sighs coming, coming ‘cross the sand hot and dry, unspoken command of the winds the winds that blow like hot sighs, the Sirocco shows strength nothing soft, this siroccan wind lifting high all earthly sins scattering memories ‘cross the land in hot, dry, unspoken command cleansing neither man nor beast will travel far as first the winds begin at par and strength upon strength with wave bringing blow under sun’s glow and soon, soon in heavy handed sirocco sighs comes the rain pelting from skies torrents of water in nacreous disguise drenching sirocco winds sigh away sun breaks through to see rainbows wash skies clean of siroccan memories < !signature--> Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 11-15-2000).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, this is truly awesome, there's me being frivilous and you being amazing. Love this one I truly do. Sirroco sighs, wonderful, utterly breathtaking. Take care Majestic Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
How about a Michigan sigh? *sigh* Excellent my friend. . .  ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
sunshine-- this is beautiful. i especially liked the ending where the rain comes and washes away the hot dry winds. perhaps a rain will come for me? eh...take care. ~amy~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
WHOA! Magnificent! Not only that, but good, too. Made me run to the ole Webster's ... "pearly iridescent substance." I love it! More, MORE! Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marsha, you're such a delight, thank you... Sven, you're on...thank you... Amy, I'll do my best to send one your way...thank you... Interloper...I too, love it when I have to pull out the dictionary...I am glad you enjoyed...thank you...{~,^} Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Karilea, Very intense in its condense With just a touch of frankincense. *L* Sy |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Sy, you know you only say things just that way so I will smile... thank you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
love the mystic feeling i have from reading your poem..loved it.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
karelia...I love the way this sounds..wonderful! |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Vicki...I like that sound too, thank you! Martie...so glad you came in for a read, thanks for the comment... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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