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Someone and Only You
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Someone and Only You |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Someone Someone has taken the sun out of my sky Someone has put these tears in my eye Someone has made my soul heave a sigh Someone has caused my heart to cry Someone has taken away your tender touch Someone has caused me to miss you so much Someone has taken your spirit to which I clutch Someone has taken away my emotional crutch That someone is my hearts sole desire That someone takes me into loves fire That someone lifts me ever higher That someone is my beloved sire That someone speaks to me tonight That someone bathes me in delight That someone gives me back my sight That someone calls me into the night Only You Only you are the sun in my sky Only you can make my soul sigh Only you have that magic touch Only you who I need this much Only you make this fires' flame Only you who can say my name Only you can bring me release Only you give me surcease Only you will be eternally true I want and I need only you Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marsha~ (standing up and applauding wildly) BRAVO!!! I LOVE THIS!! This is now my favorite of yours! You peeked in and read my heart and wrote of my love for my hubby! Well, maybe not, but after reading this, it sure felt like it!  -SEA |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Ahhhhhhh. True love reigns supreme. Why didn't I think of those lines? Signed, ENVIOUS Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marsha....see? I always said "Majestic..." and rightly so! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Beautiful heartfelt writing Marsha...when that one is found that makes you soar you never want to let go. He sounds just dreamy  Excellent work~ |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
marsha-- *sigh* this is simply breahtaking. very beautiful indeed...see what i meant when i said your work is excellent? take care. ~amy~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe, I'm glad it reflects your love, it is certainly a reflection of mine, isn't love wonderful. I know I'm getting mushy again, well I can't be hung for it, right! I'm pleased you like it, it came to me on the way to work today. (No wonder I'm a lousy driver, I don't concentrate enough!) Take care  Mushy Interloper, thank you, and I'm sure that your words will be immensely superior. I shall look forward to reading it. Kari, oh love, Majestic, I can't see that crown fitting me, unless it's one of those diamante tiara things. (Cheap and just a little flashy, is more my style love) No for the real class I look to you. Hugs MM BDC Yes that describes my love, he's as dreamy as can be. Thank you I do appreciate you dropping by Amy, Oh love, you are by far too sweet, I told you I have no faith in my work at all. It is just an excuse for me to hang around with the talented poets that live and bring beauty to life here. Take care of yourself, and you know where I am if you need me  Take care Marsha Majestic Mushy Or just plain Oy! Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Marsha, this is so very special. I felt your every word and feelings, just perfect. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Daniel J D, I'm really pleased you liked this, and I'm pleased that the feelings came out. I try which is all I can do, except that I'm always left with the feeling that I could have done better. (Well maybe I could, and maybe I will!) Thank you anyway Take care Mushy Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
two lovely poems for the price of one... very nice work Marsha ... I liked the first one's expressions and imagery... and I relate all too well to these myself right now ... missing someone special these days too take care jm |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
JM, I'm so sorry that you are feeling the pain of separation, it's such a hard thing to bear. I can only say that we are here for you, and poetry does always ease the pain. Your work is amazing always, and lately it has been stunning. I admire that you can write so magnificently when you are in such agony. Take care Mushy Marsha Warm hugs to you and oceans of affection. Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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